[fanfic][spn tv] Jimmy-Come-Lately

[vikki]

Title: Jimmy-Come-Lately (1/2)
Author: vikki
Characters: Claire, Jimmy, Amelia, Castiel, Dean, Sam
Spoilers: through 4.20
Rating/Warnings: PG (language, violence)
Summary: Castiel chose Jimmy; Claire wants to understand. 'The Rapture' as told by those left behind.

Comments

[alessandriana]

Man, poor kiddo. :(

[vikki]

yeah. D= Castiel is kind of a jerk.

[moumusu]

Oh, must this be so efficient in making me :(? One wishes Castiel was more of a lolicon. Ew, not really

[vikki]

Claire pulls such heartstrings! D= And yeah, you almost do, if only so Cas'd show up more often and be less creepy, gaaaaaaaah.

[icthyopook]

I think it's just because I'm in a highly emotional state as it is, but I think you're about to make me cry with this. XD;

And what I mean by that is this is great! :( You're catching a child's POV so well. I also like how you're using time; your transitions from one time to the next are really effective.

I think I might pass out before I get the chance to read part 2, but I'm going to get back to it as soon as I can! Also this really brightened up my night, so thanks for that. ;)

Also: Cas is a big meanie.

[vikki]

Thank you very much! If it makes you cry, well, it's kind of written to pull on the heartstrings, so, uh. Sorry? ^^;;

Writing Claire is a fun adventure because of her age. I'm glad you like the time transitions. The truth of the matter is that I'm the kind of person who would write every single second of every day if given the chance, but that would get really boring. D= Of course the whole year wasn't pure suck, I'm sure, but the fic was already getting long and I didn't feel like lingering over happy moments. I'm a jerk!

Glad this brightened up your night! Hope you like part 2!

[icthyopook]

Actually I'm one of those weird people that enjoys crying. If a story makes me cry, it's a good thing. XD;

It's sometimes difficult to decide which details are important to include and which are not. I think you're doing really well with keeping the flow of the story going by making sure each 'jump' happens after important information is given. :) But yes I totally understand the feeling of wanting to write a bunch more. :(

[vikki]

well, then, yay! XD;;

You know, the truth is? My favorite part of this story is when Cas saves Claire from getting hit by a car only she doesn't know it. What can I say? I want Castiel to be less of a bastard than he is in this story. ^^;;