You're so fast. Anyway, yaay, you ended it! This is so cute, adorable, and wonderful *hanyaaan~!* You even mentioned some details about Yue wanting to meet her son, the other name for Little Syaoran (... I heard the secret name thing is also an East Indian tradition thing...), Eriol's interaction with Syaoran, Fujitaka's encouraging moments and lots of funny Syaoran moments (the worrisome scenes, the mental images, the fainting oh god *lol*) and loveable S+S moments. Augh, I can go on and on around this but then this will get all unintelligent and random. I love this. <3 Well-done!
I had to get the whole story out before my muse tried to send me in other directions. @___@; Also, LOL at your icon.
I wanted to try to get in interactions with as many characters as possible. I kind of feel bad that Fujitaka doesn't get to show anything other than the side we always see in CCS, the fatherly side. Syaoran and Fujitaka deserve a better heart-to-heart. I hope Yue isn't out of character! After re-reading the manga I was reminded of just how WEIRD Eriol is in Syaoran's general direction and I had to make sure to get in their reactions to one another. And Syaoran fainting can totally be blamed on usagi_odango, since she's the one that suggested it. XD;;
Sakura and Syaoran are easily my biggest OTP. Writing them being sappy at each other is surprisingly easy. I had a blast!
I understand. Muses can be so persuasive. XD That was one of the epic shots of Eriol. It's unfortunate I can't find the madhatter!Touya one.
The interaction with everyone worked quite well, in my opinion. A sort of roller-coaster-ride-feel but that may have been caused by Syaoran's anxiety of becoming a father for the first time.
The Fujitaka-Syaoran interaction is really good too. Since they're now family, the encouragement from Fujitaka's side will be certainly appreciated. <33 Heart-to-heart moments are lovely too.
Yue... he sounds so concerned and afraid. But it works well here, don't worry.
Eriol IS weird towards Syaoran. I guess he likes teasing him. No wonder the excessive Eriol/Syaoran fanbase. ^^;
Ahahah, Syaoran fainting was epic. She's awesome! Tomoyo caught it on video.
They're also my biggest OTP. I don't want to see them separated, or hurt. It's good to hear you're having fun with this.
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truly syaoran torture will never, ever grow old ;__;b
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Syaoran torture is the epitome of Card Captor Sakura fanfiction. XD;; It's that serious face! It's impossible to not want to tease him!
thanks for reading this! It means a lot to me that you liked it so much ♥
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I wanted to try to get in interactions with as many characters as possible. I kind of feel bad that Fujitaka doesn't get to show anything other than the side we always see in CCS, the fatherly side. Syaoran and Fujitaka deserve a better heart-to-heart. I hope Yue isn't out of character! After re-reading the manga I was reminded of just how WEIRD Eriol is in Syaoran's general direction and I had to make sure to get in their reactions to one another. And Syaoran fainting can totally be blamed on usagi_odango, since she's the one that suggested it. XD;;
Sakura and Syaoran are easily my biggest OTP. Writing them being sappy at each other is surprisingly easy. I had a blast!
Glad you enjoyed it! ♥
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XD That was one of the epic shots of Eriol. It's unfortunate I can't find the madhatter!Touya one.
The interaction with everyone worked quite well, in my opinion. A sort of roller-coaster-ride-feel but that may have been caused by Syaoran's anxiety of becoming a father for the first time.
The Fujitaka-Syaoran interaction is really good too. Since they're now family, the encouragement from Fujitaka's side will be certainly appreciated. <33 Heart-to-heart moments are lovely too.
Yue... he sounds so concerned and afraid. But it works well here, don't worry.
Eriol IS weird towards Syaoran. I guess he likes teasing him. No wonder the excessive Eriol/Syaoran fanbase. ^^;
Ahahah, Syaoran fainting was epic. She's awesome! Tomoyo caught it on video.
They're also my biggest OTP. I don't want to see them separated, or hurt. It's good to hear you're having fun with this.
<33!!!!
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