Remembrance - Day One

[vierblith_tefu]

Title: Remembrance
Pairing: TezukaFuji
Rating: G for now
Genre: Romance/Drama
Warnings: Spoilers, and this is shounen ai
Disclaimer: I don't own Tezuka and Fuji. They own each other, though.
Parts: 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 8 |

a/n: this started as a TezuOC and Fuji helping OC get Tezuka... but that was way before the earth was formed... so, yeah, it

Comments

[sarcasticcinder]

The 2nd person, past POV is kind of strange to read at first, but I'm intrigued as to where you're taking the story with this format.

I love the interaction between Tezuka and Fuji. The things that Tezuka is willing to suffer for the tensai, and his realization that he's willing to suffer these things...too cute :)

All in all, a good read! Can't wait for the next installment!

(God...I hope I don't come off as pretentious...if I do, you can poke me with a sharp stick.)

[vierblith_tefu]

Yes, I've been told that it is, indeed, strange. (^_^)

I'm glad you like it, though - especially the interactions. Yes! Tezuka is willing to suffer for his tensai. *tries to cuddle Tezuka but gets a glare and thus moves over for Tezuka's tensai to cuddle Tezuka instead*

And I'm sure Fuji will do likewise. Thanks!

(You don't come off as pretentious... not at all, i think.)

[ketchupblood]

Sweetheart, your story is wonderful and everything, but seeing the whole thing on my f-list isn't exactly pleasant. ^^; Could you use an lj-cut, please?

[vierblith_tefu]

yes, yes, sorry. -sweatdrop-

But lj is not being friendly with me at the moment. grr. I'll go edit again. ^_^

[okinneko]

Oh... i wanted to print it out & read but the computer keeps giving me problem.I am not using my house comp so i have to read super fast.

Hmmm.. i like this story, esp Fuji-sama. *hug Fuji plushie*

[vierblith_tefu]

hehe... thanks for liking this story! ^_^ (oyif's not done, though...)

we all heart Fujiko! but we can't hug the real Fuji because the real Fuji can only be hugged by Tezuka...

[aoi_aka]

This was sweet! I can't wait to read the next chapters.

Your flipping/switching/changing POVs was a bit confusing. It looked like third person talking to Tezuka but within the same paragraph, it'd switch back to first person. I figured it out after there was conversation between them and I could understand who was narrating, Tezuka or Fuji.

Thank you for sharing!

[vierblith_tefu]

Hmm... The initial intention was to confuse. XD But, well... not anymore.

Thank you for reading! I just read all your comments and shall reply to the comment on the last chapter that you've read.^_^