Auction night

[vienna80er]

Title: Auction night
Author: vienna80er Pairing: Orlibean
Rating: NC-17 , BDSM
Disclaimer: All invented, All lies! 
A/N: No beta. Mistakes are clearly my own. Especially the “tenses”

Auction night

He is nervous. He is hearing voices and feeling the stares of people, can picture the leers they are giving. He starts shivering as he’s lead a few steps

Comments

[moanahine]

Awesome!
I was sort of expecting this to be Orlando's pov... in my head he looks more the dedicated bottom, but the surprise was effective.

What I love about it is that the tone of the man's thoughts match the events, he is humble and hopeful. Just wonderful!

[vienna80er]

Thanks so much! *hugs* I like TopOrlando so I gave it a try. Glad you like it.

[vienna80er]

*giggles* So happy you like it! I really hoped the going under was easy to follow and understandable. *blushes and sighs*

No woman indeed ;P *g*

[vienna80er]

Thank you! Glad you like it.

[jackieville]

*melts into puddle of blissed out goo*

Pefection! Oh how I love top!Orli!!! You write Orlibean beautifully and I hope we'll see tons more from you!! *hugs*

May I please friend you?

[vienna80er]

*runs for something to mop you up*

Perfection! *blushes and toes ground* Thanks so much for your encouraging fb.

And of course you can friend me. I'm always happy about making new friends. *hugs*

[jackieville]

You're very welcome, sweetheart! I meant every word *adores*

Yay!!! *runs to friend and hugs*

[vienna80er]

*starts running too*

[ex_warmfuzzi813]

Very nice. Orli the topper, such a wonderful visual. Thank you.

[vienna80er]

Thank you for reading and commenting.