"this is a gift, it comes with a price"

Jul 29, 2011 10:15

“this is a gift, it comes with a price”

A/N: For the lovely earnmysong’s birthday, very belated! Title from “Rabbit Heart (Raise it Up)” by Florence + the Machine. Set post-2.22.

Summary: It's Elena's last birthday, and only one person remembers. It's not the person Elena would expect.

and midas is king, and he holds me so tight )

i eat angst for breakfast, fever, fanfiction, vampires are damned

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kalliel July 29 2011, 15:28:12 UTC
I don't know if this is entirely the appropriate reaction but I think when I start reading a fic of yours I just kind of wait for the fever and laugh when it comes. XDDD

But this was lovely; I like off-positive birthday fics, and was endeared by the idea of Alaric and Elena sharing the obituary section in the morning.

Oh, and also the Rolodex! <3

Lovely gift~

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vie_dangerouse July 31 2011, 02:33:25 UTC
Am I really so predictable now? XDD I DON"T CARE. I REVEL IN IT. I BATHE IN IT LIKE MOONLIGHT OR A REALLY GOOD PRESSURE WATERFALL.

The obituaries section is the only part of the newspaper I generally read (current events, what?), and I really liked the sort of skewed idea of them sharing it in the morning, looking for the names of people they know, or speculating.

Glad you liked this, bb! <33

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<333 vie_dangerouse July 31 2011, 02:37:39 UTC
Yayyyyyyy! I'm so so happy that you liked this! And it's totally okay that you called it sweet and adorable- I don't hear that a lot, so I hold it to my heart and treasure it! <3

(Also, I stuck the HP reference in there just for you! Side note, I finally finally saw the film on Wednesday night, so we should discuss!)

YOU ARE SO, SO WELCOME, E. I HAD SO MUCH FUN WITH THIS I MAY HAVE TO DO IT AGAIN. AND THEN ONE MORE TIME. SO ON AND SO FORTH. <3333

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Re: <333 vie_dangerouse August 22 2011, 00:45:15 UTC
Yes, HP discussion for sure! (I'm going to give you my email in a PM, fyiiiii)

YES. I AM ALL OVER THAT PROMPT LIKE GLITTER ON A STRIPPER. kaj;raoriajaorijaoairj (So the fic just has to incorporate all of those things/words, right? And what kind of porn would you like?) <333333

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ever_neutral July 30 2011, 04:06:30 UTC
OH MY GOODDDDD WHAT IS THIS. Haha, this is the first Alaric/Elena thing I've read, and trust you to spoil me for any fic in the future. Of course, the Damon/Elena portion of my heart is CRUSHED that Damon didn't wish Elena a happy birthday, but whatever I'll get over it. This:

It’s her birthday and Elena’s older than she’s ever been. She supposes that’s true of any year, any day, any second, but after spending so much time with people that can’t or won’t die, she’s been feeling ancient and infant at once.

is STUNNING. As is this:

Elena would know; she’s addicted to that flavor, and will be until she dies with it running rampant through her veins, when it congeals and stops up her heart.

YESSSS. You give the best Elena insights.

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vie_dangerouse July 31 2011, 02:39:55 UTC
Yeah, I have no idea where Damon is during this fic. Or... Caroline. Or Jeremy, for that matter. WHATEVS IT WORKED FOR THE HOOKUP SO THERE.

I loooove your line-quoting! Thank you so much! Also, I'm so addicted to Elena/Alaric now, it's not even funny. Though I think I shall run back to Damon/Elena for a bit first!

<333

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sttatus_quo July 30 2011, 04:30:53 UTC
Loved the "he tastes like Cherry Nyquil and things she shouldn't do" One of my fave lines ever.

Great story for a ship I hadn't really thought much of- until now.

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vie_dangerouse July 31 2011, 02:41:45 UTC
Aww, thank you so much! It makes my heart happy to hear that my lines are favorites. :D

Also, I hadn't thought anything of Alaric/Elena until earnmysong mentioned it, and then once I got to thinking, it started to make more and more sense. I highly doubt it would ever happen in canon, but for now I like them both being broken but not trying to fix each others' brokenness, necessarily.

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simply_aly August 1 2011, 21:50:41 UTC
Wow, that was just...amazing. Loved that last section, so angsty.

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vie_dangerouse August 1 2011, 23:20:44 UTC
Eeee, look at your icon!!!! (wordless excitement)

Glad you enjoyed this, thank you!

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simply_aly August 2 2011, 00:30:07 UTC
I was so excited to have a reason to use this icon. There just isn't enough Alaric/Elena out there.

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vie_dangerouse August 10 2011, 01:07:17 UTC
I agree! I intend to try and fix that a little. :D

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