"Losing My Religion"

May 17, 2011 17:17

“Losing My Religion”

Prompt (by jesseofthenorth for silverbullets): Oh brother where art thou

A/N: Coda to 2.22, “All Hell Breaks Loose, Part II.” Angstyyyness. Title is taken from the song by R.E.M. Many thanks to the lovely i_speak_tongue for handholding and reassuring me that I COULD indeed write schmoop.

Wordcount: 1100ish

According to Dean Winchester, there are only two kinds of people in this world: those who are willing to do what it takes, and those who aren't. There is no third kind. )

i eat angst for breakfast, cough, [genre: gen], fever, supernatural, fanfiction, sick!dean

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si_star_x May 17 2011, 22:34:27 UTC
Oh, how lovely. I really like the way you write, and of course, fever!Dean? Yeah. Love. They totally should get a GPS and name it Lola.

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vie_dangerouse May 27 2011, 23:57:27 UTC
Youuuu. ♥ You leave such lovely comments always, that make me feel all warm and glowy inside! Like I swallowed a flashlight. Um. But in a really good way!

Also, the Lola GPS... totally inspired by the Kinks song. :)

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si_star_x June 3 2011, 13:29:46 UTC
Hehe. ^___^ *blushes* I'm glad I make you feel like you swallowed artificial light. You'll be all glowy and pretty. <3

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electricalgwen May 17 2011, 23:23:45 UTC
Ohhhhh. *sniff* I love the convenience store scene, Dean's gallows humour. And Sam, telling Dean story after story, the constellations... <3

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vie_dangerouse May 28 2011, 00:00:17 UTC
Aww, thank you! (P.S. I'm in serious love with your icon. Gorgeous!)

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greeneyes_fan May 17 2011, 23:37:29 UTC
Sick!Dean is love. Thanks for writing!

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vie_dangerouse May 28 2011, 00:00:45 UTC
It so is. Thank you for reading!

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vie_dangerouse May 28 2011, 00:48:01 UTC
You and your epically lovely comments! ♥

Thank you for pointing out all of your favorite lines- I love that because I love writing every word so much and then to share in it is just fabulous.

The dead worm is my favorite part, too! I have so many of my writing ideas at such strange times- that came after I was walking to class on a rainy morning and saw dead worms on the sidewalk. IDK I have learned not to question the Muse, just go with it.

The thing about S3- I've always liked the ticking time bomb storyline throughout and how that pervades every aspect of everything, but for some reason I've always liked writing about it better than actually watching it (besides Ruby. That's a given.), probably because that whole season just feels rushed.

Gallows humor, haha. MY FAVORITE.

♥ for your capslockness there, also. I definitely both agree and approve!

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lies_unfurl May 18 2011, 02:16:51 UTC
Your writing is just perfect. You have the best touch at capturing Sam and Dean with only the barest details, and yet it's always enough for me to form a clear picture in my mind.

"Sam tells Dean lots of stories that night. None of them are true, but they hurt so much that it feels good...He describes the juxtaposition of constellations, frames them on the moldy ceiling with his thumb and pointer finger."

I love this section so much. It's a beautiful image.

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vie_dangerouse May 28 2011, 00:49:01 UTC
You make me blush! Thank you for the beautiful comment! ♥

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