Little Wishes 16!

[victoriakada]

Title: Little Wishes
chapter: 16/19            
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: KiritoXAiji, TadashiXRyutaro, minor: KiritoXKohta, Kirito X Asagi
Bands: main: Pierrot, Plastic Tree. Minor: Ka-yu (Janne da Arc), Dir en Grey, Asagi(D)
Warning: Language, abuse, sex, blow jobs, insanity, dictators, blood, asphyxiation
Disclaimer: I do not own these people and nothing

Comments

[vampire_kiki]

huh...nice to see an update! But i need to go off to work, so comment later!

[cherrylng]

Ohhh, a siege, an assassination and an escape? Greatness indeed =w=d

[victoriakada]

oh yes indeed all in the next chapter!

[vampire_kiki]

btw, I want to give you a christmas present in the form of fanfic, but i can only hope that I can finish it on time.^^;;;

[victoriakada]

yaa! It's okay if it's a little late. Still I'm excited to hear it!

[vampire_kiki]

i'm thinking: is it a bit unbecoming to send people unhappy, bloody fanfics as christmas gifts? But then I think: Whatever.

[victoriakada]

yes that's fine with me. My friend was once sick and my first thought was "Oh I should send her smut"

[coffee_nosesock]

HA! Finally getting off my butt to post a comment!! I love the whole chapter since I'm a person that loves diolog! my favorite part was probably the Aiji and Asaugi part thought the part with Kohta and his bro was too cute!!! <3

[vampire_kiki]

it's off topic but oh, i like your bondage!San icon.XDDDD

[coffee_nosesock]

thanks dearest! Have you not seen that PV yet? omg it's soooo good!

[vampire_kiki]

i'd watched it already, the PV is good, but the music isn't quite impressive.

[vampire_kiki]

it took me days before i can get back to reply, and here i am...

I'm still struggling to push Material Pain forward but the lack of Riku to torture is weighting me down...so i envy you for moving so fast...

huhhh...even though i previously expect Aiji's getting rid of the tracking chip involving something like cutting off part of his flesh, but i'm glad Asagi helped him, somehow...

wow! Hot KiritoxKohta moment in that chapter! YEAH!

[victoriakada]

yeah I though about how exactly would they get that tracking chip out..cutting off part of himself would be violet and maybe a bit more fitting..another scar on his body from Kirito...but I thought well everyone that came from Kirito's Japan has a chip. So Tadashi and Jun and everyone has. So I think it would easier for they just jam the signal.

yeah the KxK came out of so much dialog in this chapter with not too much being done. So I put that in to entertain me!

continue to work on MP. It might be hard but if you push forward than eventually you can get back to tortured Riku.

[vampire_kiki]

well, it's okay, do whatever flow your boat!^_^

seriously, brotherly love doesn't have to come with too much action haha! the KxK pairing needs more love but sadly i can only write about them when something tragic is going on in the story^^;;;

well, as to MP if only i can figure how kisaki would talk matoi into hanging over poor riku to him, and makes the whole deal look realistic!!!!!!!