little wishes 13

[victoriakada]

Title: Little Wishes
chapter: 13/20             
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: KiritoXAiji, TadashiXRyutaro, minor: KiritoXKohta, Kirito X Asagi
Bands: main: Pierrot, Plastic Tree. Minor: Ka-yu (Janne da Arc), Dir en Grey, Asagi(D)
Warning: Language, abuse, sex, blow jobs, insanity, dictators, blood, asphyxiation
Disclaimer: I do not own these people and

Comments

[coffee_nosesock]

Well...now I know why Ryutarou-chan likes the snow! I loved this chapter!!! I kinda wanna to cry when Tada Tada burned ryu's pictures...it was sad for him you write everything so amazingly well!!! I'm as always excited to see the next chappie~ sorry I forgot to write you back~ been wiped out from chasing around a new puppy lol!! we named him Kida XD

[victoriakada]

I was debating about cutting that, it seemed to be getting long, but knowing why Ryu liked the snow seemed important and just sad when you find out why. I’m so glad you liked it. It’s rough when you write it along in a span of a few days. You wake write, eat lunch, write, eat dinner, write. When I post I feel like I ran a marathon. So ha it pays off when I get comments. I know you're a Tada/Ryu fan in this fic, but I wonder did the Aiji/Asagi scene turn out okay. I've been rather worried about that one.

A puppy that sounds like so much work!

Thank you again. I’m looking back and realize a few typing mistakes here and there. Must correct!

[coffee_nosesock]

Actually~ that was my other big favorite part that I re-read! I also liked Aiji and Kirito part! There's something about your writing that I really enjoy and I'm always re-reading things and my girlfriend teases me! I was telling her about the fic as I was reading lol!!! Yeah we got a Shiba Puppy, his name is Kida and he's 10 weeks old speaking of writing I think I'll go try to work on my weird thing for a bit....do you have msn? or facebook or something we could yak on if your on it sounds fun!

[victoriakada]

facebook works...I have no early idea how you'll find me. (I tired doing to same thing with vampire_kiki and I think we spend a good 20 min.) you can PM me your e-mail and I can try to add you.

[cherrylng]

Wow, nice new face Tadashi. Is it the one that say kill them all, burn them all, annihilate them all?

This is interesting read o^o

[victoriakada]

thank you!

[vampire_kiki]

huh..........it’s another great chapter!
well despite my fondness for Tadashi, I’ve to say pretending to go to a brothel but not calling for any service is such an EPIC FAIL, Tadashi and Kaoru, please smart-up in next time or else you guys would be in serious trouble!XD

oh one good Kirito/Aiji part in here! ARGH good job girl! It’s saddening that Aiji thinks no one loves him in his original world, but it’s fitting for his character becoz only a person who is loved by no one would wish to escape his or her life...

I like Asagi in this chapter, even though he still isn’t above lying through his teeth but his rare moment of conscience’s resurfacing makes him more two dimensional in this story. But his claim of Kirito won’t hurt Aiji just doesn’t add up with the fact that the previous replacements of ‘Aiji’ had disappeared! ARGH!

Ruki re-surfaces as well HAHAHAHAHAA!!!!! As twisted as it might sound it makes me feel quite happy! but poor Tadashi for having to witness all their evil deeds!^_^

[victoriakada]

thank you, thank you! You're encouragement keeps me going

[vampire_kiki]

well Tadashi could have at least had the gut to call up a hooker and ask him or her to massage him, it might be enough to be a cover you know!^^;;

I figured that's why he grew so fond of Kirito so quickly as well,
I see what you mean!^_^
but I just hope he didn't forget the other 'Aiji's so soon! Plus he shouldn't forget how bad Kirito had treated him at the beginning!*pouts*

Even Uruha? you're making my day, girl.

[coffee_nosesock]

She's good at that~ being awesome sauce is what she does