Comment-Week One

Mar 01, 2009 18:47



http://belrose.livejournal.com/1419.html?view=1931#t1931

Bel! i loved it! I liked the way you used examples; this allows the reader to think about what you are stating and attempt to in cooperate it into the example given, in this case adam and eve. I completely agree with this- "think about your morals and your friends morals. There's gotta be something there that draws you together"- That is so true! i've had personal experiences with friends who do not share the same morals as myself. This causes so many dramas in the friendship and as you said there has to be something that brings two people into having a close friendship.
I like what you have done! You have surrounded 'imagination' with numerous examples for the reader to relate to! It's effective!
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