Comments | vialethe: Fic: Pas de deux (Firefly, River/Mal, R)

vialethe

Fic: Pas de deux (Firefly, River/Mal, R)

Aug 03, 2011 15:18

Title: Pas de deux
Rating: R
Words: 764
Pairing: River/Mal
Summary: She dances around him, secretly, for an entire day. A quick dance in the cargo bay.

( This too is a rhythm )

river, mal, pairing: river/mal, fic: firefly

Comments 11

gwenfrewi72 August 4 2011, 04:30:44 UTC

Guh, that was wonderful!

vialethe August 4 2011, 06:03:54 UTC

Thank you, glad you found it enjoyable. ;)

garnigal August 5 2011, 00:07:26 UTC

Oh, sexy. I love that she gets to come twice and he's jealous. :)

vialethe August 5 2011, 15:18:50 UTC

There have to be some advantages to her mental abilities, right? ;) Glad you liked it!

x_deathstar_x August 6 2011, 10:58:10 UTC

Mal seems to know the steps of this dance pretty well :D Very nice!

vialethe August 6 2011, 20:52:34 UTC

Oh yes, I have to believe that's one dance Mal would be fairly expert at. Nice to see you over here btw, I always look forward to your comments at ff.net. :)

igrockspock August 8 2011, 05:23:29 UTC

This is lovely - very evocative!

vialethe August 8 2011, 06:31:56 UTC

Thank you very much, and thanks for the rec as well. :)

celeste9 August 23 2011, 14:28:51 UTC

Oh, I love the language of this! It's really gorgeous.

vialethe August 23 2011, 19:54:40 UTC

Thank you, I'm happy to hear you thought so. :)