Comments | vialethe: Fic: Like Strawberries in Summertime (Chronicles of Narnia, Lucy & Edmund, PG)

vialethe

Fic: Like Strawberries in Summertime (Chronicles of Narnia, Lucy & Edmund, PG)

Nov 15, 2011 16:06

Title: Like Strawberries in Summertime
Rating: PG
Words: 477
Characters: Lucy, Edmund, Susan, Peter
Timeline: Early Golden Age
Summary: The first winter as monarchs makes Narnia and Edmund both grow pale and cold, and Lucy refuses to accept this.

( The frost descends, sharp and cutting )

fic: narnia, edmund pevensie, lucy pevensie

Comments 7

rthstewart November 16 2011, 02:27:49 UTC

Lovely! A beautiful use of color, texture, and feel. This is a delightful, visual feast.

vialethe November 16 2011, 03:40:32 UTC

Thank you, I'm happy you thought so!

someplacetobe November 16 2011, 13:58:05 UTC

This was so lovely. So bright and happy!

vialethe November 16 2011, 23:48:26 UTC

Thanks! It's always good to have a spot of brightness in a darker season.

hereswith November 17 2011, 22:42:24 UTC

I liked this a lot! Lovely descriptions, as usual, and it was nice to see them happy. Favourite bits: colors blossom and fade by degrees, how they try to keep color alive inside and the whole final passage.

vialethe November 17 2011, 23:52:15 UTC

Thank you! I was really pushing the color theme hard here, obviously.

I didn't know you were a Narnia fan as well!

hereswith November 18 2011, 21:29:01 UTC

Not a fan as in being fannish about it, but I loved the books as a child and I've really enjoyed the movies!