Open Mouth, Insert Foot

[vfic83]

Title: Open Mouth, Insert Foot
Author: vfic83
Rating: PG
Fandom: Hikaru No Go
Pairings: Sort of implied Hikaru/Akira
Length: Drabble, 114 words
Disclaimer: My name is neither Hotta Yumi or Obata Takeshi (hell, I'm not even Japanese), so obviously the amazingness that is Hikaru No Go doesn't belong to me. Unfortunately. I'm just letting Hikaru and Co.

Comments

[sivullinen]

YESSSS YOU WROTE IT :D :D :D

*rofl*

Hikaru and his big mouth. I love it almost as much as Touya and his fashion sense :P ♥

[verloren1983]

Yeah, I wrote it... I couldn't help myself. Damn Hikaru.

Yay. I was worried about this (then again, I worry about everything that I write x_x), since it's by far the shortest thing I have ever written, because I generally don't know how to shut up. Glad to see that the point came across, though.

Ha ha... I remember so many times when I was watching the anime and Hikaru said something immensely beyond stupid, and I had to restrain myself from trying to reach into the computer screen and smack him. Hence what prompted this. ^_^

[onion_mob]

The talk about Waya's reaction wasn't actually part of "All That Matters," it was in the comments, right? I think having the words "where Touya is ticklish" in here somewhere would make things clearer. ^^;

[verloren1983]

Yes, it was in the comments.

Hmm... yeah... you're right. I guess between trying to keep this as close to 100 words as possible and making sure that Waya didn't actually say it, the thought never occurred to me that I could have Hikaru think it. ^_^ So it ended up getting shoved into the summary, which I'm sure isn't the best place for it. Thanks for pointing that out- THAT was the part I wasn't sure whether it was clear enough or not... and I don't have a beta, so I didn't have anybody to inflict this on before posting it. (Heh, did I mention that I don't know how to shut up?)

*Hurries to fix*

Thanks for reading!

[verloren1983]

The good news is that it's fixed. The bad news is ~Hello, run-on sentence!~ ....but it's 3 a.m. and I feel like crap, to be perfectly honest... so it can stay that way for now, dammit.

[_profiterole_]

Yayay! ^__^ Now, Akira is going to kill Hikaru! *chuckles*

[verloren1983]

Heh. Akira's just going to yell. A lot. But hey, then you have make-up sex ^_~ ... and you know those two know ALL about that. *Play game, fight a lot, have sex. Repeat.*

Thanks for reading! The yayness makes me happy. ^_^