Oh, wow. This is a work of art. The mood you create is so light and cool and delicate. This was really beautiful, but not pointlessly so, the construction and imagery just so perfect. Hard to choose, but my favorite line is probably:
he's counting stars as she measures the gap between them in angles and lines, nudging herself closer until their bodies are parallel and zero degrees from each other.
It's been a while since I read a fic that has to be savored. Looking forward to next Saturday! Also, I love so much the title graphic you made for this!
You're so sweet, I can't thank you enough for your comment. ♥
That's my favourite line as well, though I have to admit that it was a bit of an homage to an earlier fic I wrote (H/D). After having written it, I discovered I was strangely drawn to the complex art of maths.
Ok so this is going to sound so fangirlish but I can't wait to get this book and read it so I can read your fanfic of the pairing - and I'll be so sad if I don't ship them :(
And you should get the book, if only for the fact that it's girlish and romantic in a way clichés are often not. The book leaves no scepticism that they're the default pairing, so the coupling may woo you like it has on so many others, or you may stray with the minority. Nevertheless, when and if you do read it, I think I should write something that would suit your fancies. ♥
I don't have much to say but you've captured the atmosphere of Twilight beautifully. It's so delicate and you've portrayed the Edward/Bella in such an unbearably gorgeous fashion that I can't help but demand more!
I love the title, I love your word choice, I love the direction these vignettes are going in---your writing, as always, is an experience.
I just stumbled across your profile on Twilight fics, and wow. This is awing and inspiring, makes me want to write right now. I loved how you capture the essence of bella and edward in these little glimpses of their lives, you put your own light on the story. I'm sure Stephenie would be proud. This is a work of art as someone above me put it. Wonderfully done, can't wait til next saturday.
Aw, saying that Stephenie could be proud is nearly the best comment I've received about this, especially considering it's my first in this particular fandom. Thank you very much, and I apologise for not having gotten to your comment sooner!
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he's counting stars as she measures the gap between them in angles and lines, nudging herself closer until their bodies are parallel and zero degrees from each other.
It's been a while since I read a fic that has to be savored. Looking forward to next Saturday! Also, I love so much the title graphic you made for this!
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That's my favourite line as well, though I have to admit that it was a bit of an homage to an earlier fic I wrote (H/D). After having written it, I discovered I was strangely drawn to the complex art of maths.
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but I can't wait to get this book and read it so I can read your fanfic of the pairing - and I'll be so sad if I don't ship them :(
ok I've embarrassed myself enough now :P
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And you should get the book, if only for the fact that it's girlish and romantic in a way clichés are often not. The book leaves no scepticism that they're the default pairing, so the coupling may woo you like it has on so many others, or you may stray with the minority. Nevertheless, when and if you do read it, I think I should write something that would suit your fancies. ♥
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i can't wait to see more.
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But thank you for reading it, and I'll certainly be posting more in the following week.
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and it was so good, that i could read it really fast. ♥
you're very welcome, and i can't wait.
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I don't have much to say but you've captured the atmosphere of Twilight beautifully. It's so delicate and you've portrayed the Edward/Bella in such an unbearably gorgeous fashion that I can't help but demand more!
I love the title, I love your word choice, I love the direction these vignettes are going in---your writing, as always, is an experience.
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I just stumbled across your profile on Twilight fics, and wow.
This is awing and inspiring, makes me want to write right now.
I loved how you capture the essence of bella and edward in these little
glimpses of their lives, you put your own light on the story. I'm sure
Stephenie would be proud. This is a work of art as someone above me
put it. Wonderfully done, can't wait til next saturday.
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