i don't even ship krisyeol but this broke my heart I'M STILL KIND OF DISORIENTED AND LOST
personally i am not a huge fan of fics that put a big emphasis on the religious aspects of the heaven/hell plot devices (lucifer falling from heaven, being a former angel etc like tbh i did not know that for A LONG TIME) but this rly made good use of it and the references weren't just ~throwaway mentions~ to make your fic sound pretentious ajaldjflakdf. not to mention i love the disjoint between reality and legend even though it's nothing SMASH BANG NEW I LOVED IT ANYWAY SUE ME
even though there was no real baekyeol not even ~TRAGIC BAEKYEOL~ i really liked their friendship :c baekhyun always trusted him and was good to him WHY DO YOU LOOK TO BREAK MY HEART WITH EVERYTHING YOU DO
i just. loved. idk how else to put this eloquently but the way you intertwined religious legend and fiction (GODDAMN I'M NOT EVEN RELIGIOUS RLY ALL I DO IS GO TO YOUTH GROUP???????) was kind of messy and destroyed in a way that reflected how the world was falling apart at the seams and that sides that used to be so defined by each of their moral code have tossed it aside in favor of reaching their goal no matter how ridiculous the means
what the hell am i even trying to say i just think it's tragic as hell EVERYTHING. THE ANGELS BECOMING KILLERS. THE DEMONS WORKING AGAINST WU FAN
god lu han is a huge evil bitch i don't recall EVER DISLIKING HIM THIS MUCH HE IS JUST A SWOTTY LITTLE FLUFFY BOY IN MOST FICS and then this fic
you know what fuck the hunhan i refuse to even DISCUSS THEM
and then. this. line.
The story goes that God never really died.
and then you immediately continue with the disjoint between the tragedy and the new world, and how chanyeol finds hope in the stars at the end after despising them for so long
long heavy sigh
what do i do with myself lol. i don't always read fic but when i do i get emotionally invested as hell. you've come so far as a writer and tbqh i was not expecting something that would blow me away this much (((THIS SOUNDS MEAN OMFG SLITS ANKLES))) but it did ugh it really did. i just.
sobbing omfg vee you don't know how happy this comment makes me BRB PRINTING THIS OUT AND GETTING OBAMA-SAN TO SIGN IT TBH
I'm glad it didn't come out as pretentious????? i know religion played a major role in here and i took extreme creative liberties to make shit work around it bc 99% of the stuff i wrote will land me straight to hell with how INACCURATE IT IS LMFAO
I'M SORRY ABOUT THE LACK OF BAEKYEOL I'LL WRITE YOU TRAGIC BAEKYEOL AS REPAYMENT??? ;~~~;
omg you read so deep into this apseigajsdf I'M REALLY GLAD IT'S AN IMPROVEMENT. honestly i wasn't expecting it to be this huge and like... not completely shitty or fucked up SO I'M PRETTY HAPPY WITH IT AND NOW I'M EVEN HAPPIER BC YOU'RE SO IMPRESSED ASDFJKL
i don't even ship krisyeol but this broke my heart I'M STILL KIND OF DISORIENTED AND LOST
personally i am not a huge fan of fics that put a big emphasis on the religious aspects of the heaven/hell plot devices (lucifer falling from heaven, being a former angel etc like tbh i did not know that for A LONG TIME) but this rly made good use of it and the references weren't just ~throwaway mentions~ to make your fic sound pretentious ajaldjflakdf. not to mention i love the disjoint between reality and legend even though it's nothing SMASH BANG NEW I LOVED IT ANYWAY SUE ME
even though there was no real baekyeol not even ~TRAGIC BAEKYEOL~ i really liked their friendship :c baekhyun always trusted him and was good to him WHY DO YOU LOOK TO BREAK MY HEART WITH EVERYTHING YOU DO
i just. loved. idk how else to put this eloquently but the way you intertwined religious legend and fiction (GODDAMN I'M NOT EVEN RELIGIOUS RLY ALL I DO IS GO TO YOUTH GROUP???????) was kind of messy and destroyed in a way that reflected how the world was falling apart at the seams and that sides that used to be so defined by each of their moral code have tossed it aside in favor of reaching their goal no matter how ridiculous the means
what the hell am i even trying to say i just think it's tragic as hell EVERYTHING. THE ANGELS BECOMING KILLERS. THE DEMONS WORKING AGAINST WU FAN
god lu han is a huge evil bitch i don't recall EVER DISLIKING HIM THIS MUCH HE IS JUST A SWOTTY LITTLE FLUFFY BOY IN MOST FICS and then this fic
you know what fuck the hunhan i refuse to even DISCUSS THEM
and then. this. line.
The story goes that God never really died.
and then you immediately continue with the disjoint between the tragedy and the new world, and how chanyeol finds hope in the stars at the end after despising them for so long
long heavy sigh
what do i do with myself lol. i don't always read fic but when i do i get emotionally invested as hell. you've come so far as a writer and tbqh i was not expecting something that would blow me away this much (((THIS SOUNDS MEAN OMFG SLITS ANKLES))) but it did ugh it really did. i just.
gonna go lie on a bed and think about life now
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I'm glad it didn't come out as pretentious????? i know religion played a major role in here and i took extreme creative liberties to make shit work around it bc 99% of the stuff i wrote will land me straight to hell with how INACCURATE IT IS LMFAO
I'M SORRY ABOUT THE LACK OF BAEKYEOL I'LL WRITE YOU TRAGIC BAEKYEOL AS REPAYMENT??? ;~~~;
omg you read so deep into this apseigajsdf I'M REALLY GLAD IT'S AN IMPROVEMENT. honestly i wasn't expecting it to be this huge and like... not completely shitty or fucked up SO I'M PRETTY HAPPY WITH IT AND NOW I'M EVEN HAPPIER BC YOU'RE SO IMPRESSED ASDFJKL
curls in bed with you :c
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