Ode to Optophobia (6B)

Sep 19, 2011 16:32

Title: Ode to Optophobia, or: Ten Men That Loved Annie Edison (12/19)
Author: veryspecial0ne
Rating: R for the whole series, to be safe.
Word count: ~2000 for this installment, ~31,000 for the series thus far.
Disclaimer: I have now been tweeted by both Dan Harmon and Alison Brie. I'm pretty sure that's the closest I'll ever come to having any ( Read more... )

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stephanierb September 20 2011, 01:48:20 UTC

Hahaha. Poor Abed. He handled that pretty well considering Annie seemed like she was about to explode.

I love that Jeff knows Annie so well that he can prep Abed on how to handle her. At this point, after so many years together, it makes sense, but it still gave me a little thrill to read it.

"Jeff?" Bianca asks politely.

"My dad," cuts in Abed, and he catches Annie's eye as both of their mouths twitch, though hers contains a hint of disapproval at the reference.

I laughed out loud at that, I hope that made it onto Abed's video. It would serve Jeff right, even if he's planning a Valentine's Day surprise for Annie. Brilliant.

I love all of the callbacks as well, the chloroform and robotic Abed. It brings it all full circle for me so the jump in time doesn't feel so acute. The missing years seem to fall away, if that makes sense.

"It's cool. Troy said he's been there for more than enough of your relationship."

I SINCERELY hope that's a teaser of what's to come, because that sounds pretty hysterical.

Wonderful as always.

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veryspecial0ne September 20 2011, 03:59:48 UTC
I like to think that video is going to be part of Abed's toast at the wedding, haha. If there's anyone in the group just as likely to use an audio/visual aid as Annie, it's Abed.

Thanks as always!

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