Having read all these comments re: Tight, I can only say: Thank you all SO very MUCH. If I had the time to reply individually, right now, I would... unfortunately, a good friend (of 20+ years) lost his mother yesterday, so I have not been home much the last 24 hours...
and now must go to bed early so I can get up at 4:30am to get to the hospital by 6:30am. And then do it again Friday. (This is the absolute worst aspect of nursing school for a night owl such as myself...) And then attend the wake.
Thank you, everyone, for pointing out typos, continuity errors, cut tags (will learn those Real Soon) and directing me to other DS communities on LJ. Those who offered to beta... I'm taking you up on it!