FIC - Distracted

[verucasalt123]

title: Distracted
pairing:Sam/Dean
rating:R
a/n: short little ficlet
summary: Sam tries very hard to let his brother concentrate on work.

Comments

[gooferdusty]

devious little brother! i loved it!
i'm thinking dean was only ever half resisting. i mean, come on, man's not blind lol!

[verucasalt123]

Glad you liked it!!!!!

[verucasalt123]

Sianne, there was a comment here from you and it disappeared. I was just going to say thank you for the compliment on the icon, wonder where THAT pic came from????

[sakura_no_mi]

IDK how you pull off 1st person, but you totally do. I've only ever tried it once myself and I gave myself the willies. Hehe. Nice work :)

[skyguysgirl]

I love this PERFECT fic so much, I'm sure I won't be able wipe the blissful smile off my face for hours:) I haven't read many 1st person fics that I like, but your Sam is amazing

[verucasalt123]

Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback. I'm really glad you liked the story so much. I loved writing it :)

[jaysawyer]

Oh how I love unapologetically manipulative Sammy! HE can't help it if he has Dean all wrapped around his little finger and he accidentally crooks said finger in his own general direction from time to time! And darling dopey Dean, so unintentionally accommodating. Sigh. Funny stuff! I like what you did with the first person account too, it reveals him in all of his selfish but well-meaning charm. Lovely!

[verucasalt123]

Thanks!!!! I have to say, in my brain, though I am a dedicated SamGirl (obviously), I see him as being pretty selfish and manipulative when it comes to getting what he wants. This was the first first-person POV thing I ever wrote, I think, and I'm pretty sure the only first-person Sam POV I've ever done. I'm glad you liked it :)