Fic - Did We Get It? for hoodie_time

[verucasalt123]

Title: Did We Get It?
Genre: Gen
Rating: R for lots of curse words.
W/C : ~1200
Summary: Written for the following anonymous prompt at Round 6 of the hoodie_time comment fic meme: Dean gets thrown into hard objects a lot, right? So, Dean has a concussion. Make it realistic. Hope this is realistic enough for you :)

Comments

[peepingdru]

like living at my place...lol
Nice one love:D

[verucasalt123]

Thanks Dru!!

[sakura_no_mi]

OMG, you win at 1st person POV :)

[verucasalt123]

WOW, thank you, I've gotten more used to it lately :)

[katiki7]

Yep, it's realistic! I particularly loved this line: "Instead, he told me that I was blurry. Well, to be more accurate, he asked me why I was blurry. Fuck. Clue number two. "

And yeah, I worry about the cumulative symptoms too. Think about how long it took Sidney Crosby to recover from his latest concussion.

[verucasalt123]

Thanks!!!

[dante_s_hell]

I didn't know I needed this fic until I read it. I've been so distant from SPN fandom, but this? This right here reminds me how much I love it so.

Your Sam voice is just so damn good, hon!

Thanks for this!

[verucasalt123]

I am very glad you liked it, honey. I haven't posted any SPN fic in a while because I've been working on my BB but this hoodie_time thing has got me inspired :)

[firesign10]

Wow, that was very effective!! I haven't read much first person in SPN, and I liked it here a lot. A very direct sense of Sammy's fears. Also liked how on one hand, there's the purely practical side of caring for the concussion, yet on the other it's about the judging of the severity, the building of the symptoms, Sam's dread of where this kind of injury is going to leave Dean in the future, and the deepest fear of Dean not recovering at all. A lot of ground covered in a short piece! Well done!!

[verucasalt123]

Thank you so much for the thoughtful comment!