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So, for my English class, we submit rough drafts that are reviewed by the rest of the class as well as the proffessor.
Doing my normal "I really couldn't care less about the quality of a first draft" thing, I produced a three page paper in just under twenty minutes. I got the average feedback of "you might want to add a few more quotes" or "make the thesis clearer" which is fine.
but then, I came across this little gem:
"First of all your paragraphs need to be connected, which is part of organization."
Doing my normal "I really couldn't care less about the quality of a first draft" thing, I produced a three page paper in just under twenty minutes. I got the average feedback of "you might want to add a few more quotes" or "make the thesis clearer" which is fine.
but then, I came across this little gem:
"First of all your paragraphs need to be connected, which is part of organization."