Two Random Writing Comments
1.) 'Exercise' is not the same as 'exorcise' , and making me giggle at the idea of a possessing spirit being taken to a gym and made to work out is probably not your goal with the use of the word.
2.) What is with everyone and their 'alpha male wants beta sexually' thing? Cuz with wolves and whatnot? The alphas want the other alphas. Nobody else gets to have sex with anyone. Do the alphas lead and control? Absolutely. But it's not about sex. In a wolf pack the alpha male and the alpha female are (usually) the only ones who mate, any other alphas are sent on their way to form new packs or die alone or take over, and non-alphas submit and serve and don't get laid. K? I get the whole human sexuality thing often a dominant personality and a submissive hooking up and whatnot--but it's not about alpha/beta-ness. Really. (This annoys me most with werewolves:p)
2.) What is with everyone and their 'alpha male wants beta sexually' thing? Cuz with wolves and whatnot? The alphas want the other alphas. Nobody else gets to have sex with anyone. Do the alphas lead and control? Absolutely. But it's not about sex. In a wolf pack the alpha male and the alpha female are (usually) the only ones who mate, any other alphas are sent on their way to form new packs or die alone or take over, and non-alphas submit and serve and don't get laid. K? I get the whole human sexuality thing often a dominant personality and a submissive hooking up and whatnot--but it's not about alpha/beta-ness. Really. (This annoys me most with werewolves:p)