Comments | veronicamarsfic: Fic: Who am I 9/? Logan/Veronica PG-13

brandee_06 in veronicamarsfic

Fic: Who am I 9/? Logan/Veronica PG-13

Apr 24, 2006 21:41

Title: Who Am I 9/? PG-13 ( Read more... )

brandee_06, brandee_06 - who am i, pg-13, veronica, logan

Comments 42

reve_silencieux April 24 2006, 20:42:09 UTC

Heee! Oh I loved this! Too many lines to quote! It was great how she started to stand up to Weevil, and then to Duncan. I like how you're inserting Weevil and hopefully their friendship.

Hmm since I can’t stay with dad at the State Pen, I guess mom gets me right?

HA! So Logan! Great line. And all their banter at the end about their crushes? So cute. Veronica is learning to snark and have fun. It's great. Wonderful update like usual. I can't wait for more.

klawick003 April 25 2006, 11:50:33 UTC

I wanted to comment under this comment b/c we have teehee icons, lol..anyway, this was a beautiful chapter. Lovin it.

brandee_06 April 26 2006, 13:34:48 UTC

thanks so much for the reply!! I'm glad you're enjoying...

brandee_06 April 26 2006, 13:34:12 UTC

Aww Thanks so much.. Would have replied sooner but its the week before finals and my classes are driving me crazzzzyyyy..

Heh, I liked the state pen line myself, so I'm glad that someone else did.. Glad you liked the banter at the end, it was fun to write.. Thanks so much for the reply!

fading_spark April 24 2006, 20:45:26 UTC

Aw, cute ending! Heh, Weevil should give DK what he deserves.

“Me playing video games at the Echolls house? That’s so going on my blog.”

LOVED that line! Mac's awesome. =D

brandee_06 April 26 2006, 13:36:33 UTC

I'm glad you liked the Mac line.. I was really worried about writing Mac...
Poor DK, he's just loosing it huh? THanks so much for the feedback!

rowanceleste April 24 2006, 20:55:22 UTC

Great update! I love the developing Veronica 2.0 and the friendship with Weevil! Logan's not really going appreciate Veronica's friendship with him, but hey...all her friends can't be female! I really enjoyed the chapter and I'm looking forward to the next update :)

brandee_06 April 26 2006, 13:40:42 UTC

I'm glad you're enjoying Veronica as she changes. Yeah Logan can't be too happy about Weevil, but I'm sure he'll deal... I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter thanks so much for the feedback!!!

dawnieangel April 24 2006, 21:19:46 UTC

Oh CUTE! I LOVE this fic! I agree with Fading on lovin that Mac line! Made me totally giggle! Please update soon!

brandee_06 April 26 2006, 13:42:14 UTC

awww thanks.. I'm glad you liked the Mac line..THanks sooo much for the feedback!

picturisque April 24 2006, 21:29:13 UTC

great update but a few typos:

angery - angry
you're - your
your - you're
quite - quiet

i loved the bantering at the end. <3 you write their snarkiness so well. :]

brandee_06 April 26 2006, 13:44:08 UTC

ooooh not sure how me and the beta missed the typos thanks for pointing them out...

Glad you liked the bantering.. Aww I'm always nervous about the snark so thanks bunches!! THanks for the feedback!

picturisque April 27 2006, 19:02:01 UTC

Do you go looking for mistakes?