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Fic: Tell Me Anything About You I Don't Know (Logan/Veronica) R

May 05, 2005 19:28

Title: Tell Me Anything About You I Don’t Know
Author: Sorcha
Pairing/Character: Logan/Veronica
Word Count: 451
Rating: R
Summary: She can see them becoming the ‘affair that could never work’ one day…
Spoilers/Warnings: None really, this is almost immediate future.

( tell me anything about you i dont know )

sexycereal, r, veronica, logan

Comments 35

goddesspharo May 5 2005, 11:46:00 UTC

Oooh, nice. I love that it comes full circle.

sexycereal May 5 2005, 11:48:19 UTC

Thank you!

bluerosefairy May 5 2005, 13:19:11 UTC

Curling up her fingers in soft shirt she thinks he is more boyish than he lets on. More innocent than he is ever given credit for.

And that right there? Is Logan Echolls in less than twenty words. I adore the way you've painted this picture of a more innocent Logan than we usually see him. Afraid to let go because it'll mean giving up control.

Beautiful job, hon!

sexycereal May 5 2005, 13:33:59 UTC

Thank you very much! I used to know a guy who was almost a less jackass version of Logan. Actually I know a lot of people who use bravado in the same way - it's such an interesting character trait.

tpeets May 5 2005, 13:41:36 UTC

Good job! i'm sorry you're feeling crappy! I hope all these positive comments make you feel at least a little better.

sexycereal May 5 2005, 13:43:03 UTC

LOL, thank you twice, for the feedback and the well wishes. Fandom of any kind makes me feel fuzzy - the thought of two more months of college before I can escape to Uni makes me feel crappy!

maybedarkpink May 5 2005, 13:53:26 UTC

Awesome! I love your description of Logan, and the relationship between him and Veronica. Your style is very vivid and unique. Great job!

sexycereal May 5 2005, 13:54:55 UTC

Thank you so much - I think just recently I've been tapping into how I want to write rather than the pre-defined structures that exist.

juleet May 5 2005, 14:03:04 UTC

your words are so beautiful.

I think these are my favorite lines:

But right now they are like a High School letter - sweet and naïve and not very permanent. Water soluble ink and doodles that look very pretty but seem to have no meaning. They are odd lines at crossed angles and they seem to be going everywhere but they always end up back here.

it reflects a darker aspect of the L/V relationship that isn't obvious but still there.

sexycereal May 5 2005, 14:04:48 UTC

Thank you!!