Fic: Undercover Angel, Part IV (Ensemble), Rated: R

[skk670]

Title: Undercover Angel, Part IV

Comments

[zeldafitzgerald]

This is sooooo good I'd have it either way. Although the first is appealing for its speediness.

[skk670]

Thank you for letting me know, and for leaving feedback.

[adhuri_roshni]

Ooh Norris, I'm anxious to see how this plays out so I vote for the first option assuming you have the time to do it.

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[skk670]

Made the correction, thank you for the catch. And thank you for leaving feedback.

[misa_05]

Love this darling like all of the other chapters.

As for which to decide... I like the first because of the speediness, but if thats going to rush you and take away major events or plotlines to the story then I would go with the second... its up to you. Either or I will wait however long it takes.

Melissa

[skk670]

I wish I had more time for this. I feel like I'm going to short-change you by not dropping clues along the way. But I hope the story will still be satisfying.

Thank you for leaving feedback.

[rowanceleste]

Even though option #2 is longer, I do prefer that option but of course, whatever you choose is fine :)

[skk670]

Thank you so much for letting me know your opinion. I feel badly that I'm rushing this but I want to finish my season before RT finishes his. That way, this story will be out of the way and I'll be able to concentrate on RT's story instead of trying to slot clues in my head.

[singer1940]

I'm voting for option #1, just because it's speedier. Great chapter! What is Norris up to?...

[skk670]

You'll find out what Norris is up in the next chapter. In fact, he's the glue that holds my whole theory together. I hope you'll like it.

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