Yours is a fic that I am always checking back for another installment.
Excellent as always.
Your Logan voice is spot on. His vidcam commentary at the Mars' house was hilarious and totally in character. Same with the showtunes in the limo (and now we have an explanation for it! Awesome.)
I love, love, love that Duncan came to Logan to reconcile and moreso to enlist his help with their escape. I always felt that their friendship got short shrift in canon this season, so I must say that I like your version better.
I love Logan and Veronica (and their friends) having the storybook prom experience - they try to act all jaded and above it, but imagining them standing in line for prom photos in front of a cheesy background, just like all of the rest of us probably did...it was really sweet.
Although Clemmons frisking Logan (and V) for alcohol -- and not finding any -- interjected just enough of the VM cynicism into the prom scene.
However, just like last chapter, I'm left with an ominous feeling, like I'm waiting for the other shoe to drop -- especially with the Logan/Weevil/Thumper altercation, plus V noticing Logan's knuckles and seeing the L/D reconciliation. Your story was angsty for so long, that I just worry/wonder how long the happiness (and the normal) can last. VM is noir, after all...
...but I'll still be checking back looking for updates! Great job.
Excellent as always.
Your Logan voice is spot on. His vidcam commentary at the Mars' house was hilarious and totally in character. Same with the showtunes in the limo (and now we have an explanation for it! Awesome.)
I love, love, love that Duncan came to Logan to reconcile and moreso to enlist his help with their escape. I always felt that their friendship got short shrift in canon this season, so I must say that I like your version better.
I love Logan and Veronica (and their friends) having the storybook prom experience - they try to act all jaded and above it, but imagining them standing in line for prom photos in front of a cheesy background, just like all of the rest of us probably did...it was really sweet.
Although Clemmons frisking Logan (and V) for alcohol -- and not finding any -- interjected just enough of the VM cynicism into the prom scene.
However, just like last chapter, I'm left with an ominous feeling, like I'm waiting for the other shoe to drop -- especially with the Logan/Weevil/Thumper altercation, plus V noticing Logan's knuckles and seeing the L/D reconciliation. Your story was angsty for so long, that I just worry/wonder how long the happiness (and the normal) can last. VM is noir, after all...
...but I'll still be checking back looking for updates! Great job.
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