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myboyrobot in veronicamarsfic

Fic: A Long Night

Mar 10, 2005 17:24

Title: A Long Night
Author: Marvello
Pairing: Logan/Veronica
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Logan accompanies Veronica on a stake-out.
Spoilers: Nothing overt, but any inferred explanation comes from the last few episodes (14 and 15).
Notes: This is just a little smutlet I wrote for my friend Aspen! Feedback appreciated but by no means necessary.

( A Long Night )

myboyrobot, nc-17, veronica, logan

Comments 20

plumforgot March 11 2005, 17:40:17 UTC

Logan saying "hot little cunt" in his rich-boy drawl is SERIOUSLY, DELIRIOUSLY HOT. And I really love this paragraph: The smell of the car seats, the coffee, and Logan's sea-scented aftershave... It puts a whole world around the fic in just a few dashes of memory. I can see them clearly, like the flashbacks in the show.

Also, the conversation in the beginning is just as orgasmic as the sex. Snark love you long time! :D

bailunrui March 11 2005, 17:58:49 UTC

Wow. Your characters are so spot on - the best characterization I've read yet. The imagery was so vivid and detailed and HOT OMG HOT! Me likey. :)

lovechilde March 11 2005, 18:15:21 UTC

"Seven minutes, forty seconds', huh?
LOL, lovely.

pixiee March 11 2005, 19:26:23 UTC

OMGWTF. That was so. freakin. hot.

And the characters were totally fitting and Logan was like **fans self**. Whoo. I do believe I was gettin' the vapors.

Thanks for this piece of lovely work!

myboyrobot March 13 2005, 11:55:44 UTC

Heeee! Thank you so much for the response! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

eyesfullofhope March 11 2005, 20:44:26 UTC

My God that was good. From the voices of V/L to this very line:

The very way he touched her was his trademark contradiction of careless intensity.

I adored it. Great job.

myboyrobot March 13 2005, 11:54:38 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.