Thanks for the cathartic read through all those different AU scenarios. It was fun and though I wish there had been a Logan in any universe that saw past the “Pixie Bitch Rich Dude Kryptonite” and won himself a Meg, I kind of like that they both had "unrequited" crushes on each other.
I've seen Meg/Lilly looking down on Neptune fics before, and I never get tired of them. The environment you described reminded me a lot of Little Nicky and Reese Witherspoon's character so I was vastly amused that Lilly was there. Heh. (And also a little incredulous because I figured Heaven would have a 'No Lilly's Permitted' sign hanging on the door, heh. Unrepentant sinners, what can you do?)
My main con-crit would be that there were a lot of little typos that distracted me as I read through it. Just minor things that a quick beta read would eliminate. Such as this:
“Like Dount and Lily Junior.”Do you mean Donut
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Thanks for such a great review. I went back and fixed as many of my typos and other mistakes that I could find, but I warn that my editing skills are very poor. *blush*
It was fun and though I wish there had been a Logan in any universe that saw past the “Pixie Bitch Rich Dude Kryptonite” and won himself a Meg, I kind of like that they both had "unrequited" crushes on each other.
Hee thanks, part of me kinda wanted them to make out in every AU, but it just never really panned out. Even though if it makes you feel better I did have them making out briefly in the first draft of the Logan section, unfortch it didn't flow that well with the rest...
I figured Heaven would have a 'No Lilly's Permitted' LOL! yea but if it did we'd have no Meg/Lily heaven fics. The Little Nicky thing was didn't even enter my mind until you mentioned it, but I can see it.
Anyway, I loved the Logan section best. Pixie sticks!! :)
Jeje the Pixie Sticks- Logan just loves them.
And I actually found myself quite fond of Piz in this fic which is no small
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This was fabulous. I loved the part about Cassidy not blowing up the bus 'cause Meg was on the best, although the Meg/Dick "Pixie Bitch" conversation was, of course, totally priceless. =)
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I've seen Meg/Lilly looking down on Neptune fics before, and I never get tired of them. The environment you described reminded me a lot of Little Nicky and Reese Witherspoon's character so I was vastly amused that Lilly was there. Heh. (And also a little incredulous because I figured Heaven would have a 'No Lilly's Permitted' sign hanging on the door, heh. Unrepentant sinners, what can you do?)
My main con-crit would be that there were a lot of little typos that distracted me as I read through it. Just minor things that a quick beta read would eliminate. Such as this:
“Like Dount and Lily Junior.”Do you mean Donut ( ... )
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It was fun and though I wish there had been a Logan in any universe that saw past the “Pixie Bitch Rich Dude Kryptonite” and won himself a Meg, I kind of like that they both had "unrequited" crushes on each other.
Hee thanks, part of me kinda wanted them to make out in every AU, but it just never really panned out. Even though if it makes you feel better I did have them making out briefly in the first draft of the Logan section, unfortch it didn't flow that well with the rest...
I figured Heaven would have a 'No Lilly's Permitted' LOL! yea but if it did we'd have no Meg/Lily heaven fics. The Little Nicky thing was didn't even enter my mind until you mentioned it, but I can see it.
Anyway, I loved the Logan section best. Pixie sticks!! :)
Jeje the Pixie Sticks- Logan just loves them.
And I actually found myself quite fond of Piz in this fic which is no small ( ... )
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Awww, I love Meg fics.
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