Comments | veronicamarsfic: Fic: Nightfall (Logan/Veronica) NC-17

utsusemia in veronicamarsfic

Fic: Nightfall (Logan/Veronica) NC-17

Jul 30, 2006 01:20

Title: Nightfall ( Read more... )

Comments 145

littlemisbitch July 30 2006, 06:04:54 UTC

"Veronica...I swear, if anything, the smallest part of me survives my death, I'll find you. If there's a chance, I swear..."

That line is the first EVER from a fic to make me cry. That means you are awesome.

utsusemia July 30 2006, 06:39:29 UTC

Very cool :) Maybe I should have put "tissues might be necessary" in the warning label...

rindee July 30 2006, 06:08:32 UTC

I'm crying as I write this and I can't tell you how unbelievably moving this story is. So beautiful, so quiet, but filled with such passion. I love the sharpness of the focus, and the elliptical nature of the story, with all the thoughts and spaces between each scene. The use of the poetry is wonderful, and the way you matched your writing style to the poetry is amazing. Wow. I just don't have the proper words to express myself right now, but I love the way each of them chose to die. So characteristic in both cases.

utsusemia July 30 2006, 06:41:18 UTC

I really appreciate that. Thank you.

ignite_the_nite July 30 2006, 06:16:55 UTC

I'm utterly speechless. This is quite possibly the best fic I've ever read and it's one of a few that has caused me to cry. The way you pieced together both parts of the story was so well done and you capture Logan and Veronica in a way that is unparalled.

Anyway, thank you for writing and sharing such a compelling piece. :)

utsusemia July 30 2006, 06:31:01 UTC

Thank you!

flinkkamingo3 July 30 2006, 06:17:37 UTC

God.

You made me cry. I never cry. Ever. And I'm still crying.

This is... God, I can't handle it. And yet I'm going to add it to my memories because it is beautiful and amazing and heartbreaking and I'll probably end up reading it a million times.

Okay, I really need some Kleenex.

utsusemia July 30 2006, 06:25:34 UTC

If it makes you feel better, I cried while I was writing it. Which is sort of sad ;)

Thank you!

annest_of_annes July 30 2006, 06:29:55 UTC

So...I hate it when people say "like, OMG, crying too hard!" because I honestly never get THAT emotional when I read stories. They're just STORIES. But (and it could be latemom'scancerjustsleepylongdayfeelingsad) I cried, I genuinely cried, and I have to say...thank you. Thank you for writing something so meaningful on so many different levels; thank you for treating the subject with dignity and humanity; thank you for writing it so beautifully. It was amazing, and every bit of it touched me. It is truly a work of art.

utsusemia July 30 2006, 06:55:36 UTC

Honestly, feedback like this is why I write. I'm so glad that you liked it and it touched you like that. Really, thank you.