Where Disappointment and Regret Collide (Logan, L/Vish) R

[flinkkamingo3]

Title: Where Disappointment and Regret Collide
Author: Lindsay
Pairing/Character: Logan. L/V, L/H, L/K, and V/D mentioned.
Word Count: 1,183
Rating: R, for Logan's lovely language.
Summary: Logan's going to get sh**faced. With each kiss from the Absolut bottle's biting mouth he thinks of a new reason.
Spoilers: This takes place sometime shortly after

Comments

[klawick003]

Oh. My. God. This was so heartwrenching. Seriously, I loved these lines:

He’s half way there by the time he falls apart on the couch, Conan on mute, an open bottle of Absolut vodka clenched in his fist.

**Apart being crossed out, aww**

Because his father fucked his girlfriend then smashed an ashtray against her head. Because his mom would rather be fish food than his mother. Because ever since that day Veronica kissed him at the Camelot, that day when she saved him he saved her, his hard shell has been cracking and leaving little Logan crumbs in her wake.

Poor, broken, Logan! You really captured him. God, this was my FAVORITE: Because Veronica’s an endless loop in his head that he’s given up trying to stop. Because with his face in her neck he was thinking maybe he could start breathing again

I think I loved every line! Logan talking about his heart. God, way to kill me. And this, was PERFECT:::She’s all the right colors in all the wrong shades. But if he squints his eyes and concentrates on silence he can almost pretend she’s his blueeyesblondehairpinklips. Almost

SO PERFECT. I am in love with that line. Amazing Logan introspective.

The phone conversation between Logan and Veronica was amazing. Perfect. And I loved this: Blueblondepink wants him alive.

Perfectly crafted fic that is definitely going in the memories! Thanks for sharing!

[flinkkamingo3]

Wow, I can't believe something I wrote is going in someone's memories. Thank you. I'm glad you liked it so much.