New Red Dwarf fic - "Fools Fall" part 2/2 (R for language)

[veronica_rich]

"Fools Fall"
Red Dwarf chars. Lister/Rimmer, et. al.
Rated R for language
Summary: Lister. Rimmer. Kinitawawe bride on the rundown. Marriage of convenience. You guess the trope.
Continued from Part 1 ...

Comments

[bayliss]

Oh Damn. Vero that was awesome. :-) Really awesome.

[veronica_rich]

Danke schoen. *bows*

[saylee]

I love it! It's so very them.

[veronica_rich]

I do like trying to stay close to character, if not totally "in" - thanks!

[missflibble]

Wonderful! It always makes me a bit sad to think that Lister would grow old and die with Rimmer being a hologram. Must be weird to see him as an old man and then for him to be resurrected 'young' again. MAYBE YOU SHOULD WRITE IT.

[veronica_rich]

Hey, that's been done! A nice long story for you. :-D

Thanks!

[missflibble]

I DIDN'T KNOW ABOUT THIS.

Thank you!!

[janamelie]

I kept an eye out for anything I could offer concrit on, since you requested it, but found nothing. This is just a lovely tale. :)

You're really good at conveying the nuances of their relationship - the affection, the snarkiness, the good old-fashioned lust. ;)

Oh, and I almost laughed out loud at the respective amounts of coaxing required by Cat and Kryten. :D

[veronica_rich]

I don't know if it's the older I get or the longer in fandom and writing/reading fanfic (likely the latter), but I think less about trying to describe OTPs's sex lives and try to think more about the much harder task of trying to convey "OK, these two have REALLY GOOD sexy funtimes when they're alone, but I want to show that in their other actions and mannerisms leading up to or after that." I like a challenge. ;-)

Thanks!

[felineranger]

Oh I love this so much. Anything that involves them getting married always makes me feel a little bit weepy, in a good way. And this fic was just so them...so right...Oh, the feels!

[veronica_rich]

Hopefully it gave you some laughs and eye-rolling moments, too! ;-)

Thanks!