Comments | veronica_rich: Drabble: "Hung Up"

veronica_rich

Drabble: "Hung Up"

Sep 28, 2008 01:50

Title: "Hung Up"
Rating: R for language
Characters: POTC Jack/Will. Slash.
Disclaimer: Not mine. I make no money, even if I wanted to. Dammit. (I should've become a sketcher or musician.)
Summary: You don't leave Captain Jack Sparrow waiting. Or do you? Written for the jackwill prompt "Heat."
A/N: In response to a request from danglingdingle to write something based on ( Read more... )

Comments 25

vienna80er September 28 2008, 09:44:28 UTC

Me likes!

veronica_rich September 29 2008, 05:09:40 UTC

Me happy! *G*

xzombiexkittenx September 28 2008, 12:45:17 UTC

I really like this. I like, Jack’s breath raced. Time dragged between their meetings. “You don’t rule me-” Petulant Jack is a classic and there's so much between the lines on this one. Somehow I'm picturing Jack as drunk (y'know, more than usual) during this conversation.

And aggressive!Will is for the win!

veronica_rich September 29 2008, 05:10:48 UTC

Somehow I'm picturing Jack as drunk (y'know, more than usual) during this conversation.

I don't know, but I like your thinking. Yes, I believe he'd had a few put away while muttering over late Will. Damn independent men! ;-)

mamazano September 28 2008, 13:14:53 UTC

Very nice! A wonderful way to wake up.

I like that they both are dominant, and yet both need each other.

Great interpretation of the prompt "Gimme Heat"

;)

veronica_rich September 29 2008, 05:09:25 UTC

I could've just put up photos of both of them in response to "heat" without any effort on my part and it would've satisfied the prompt, I think. *G*

Glad you liked it!

pktaxwench September 28 2008, 13:39:15 UTC

I'm never going to be able to listen to ABBA again without slashy thoughts putting an evil smile on my face....

veronica_rich September 29 2008, 05:07:25 UTC

That's what these stories are for. ;-)

danglingdingle September 28 2008, 14:32:30 UTC

Now, Jack, don't be unreasonable, the man does have a job. Besides, who are we trying to fool with the "You don't rule me"- act?
Jack, darling, there's ruling and then there's ruling and I'm not terribly sorry to have to break this to you, since I suspect you alreay know, but you fall in the latter category. How wonderful is that?

I love them like this. I really, really do. Everything that's there and everything that's between the lines, I love every word of it.

And thanks for indulging my whims :)

veronica_rich September 29 2008, 05:08:33 UTC

Jack doesn't want to admit he's ruled - but really, they both are. As is anyone who has an investment in another human being acting a certain way.

But they're both WELL rewarded, I suspect. Glad you enjoyed it!