Triple drabble

[veronica_rich]

Drabble Prompt 20 from potc_dogwatchTitle: Time’s Run Out

Comments

[gryphons_lair]

Oh, ouch. How perfectly right, and how ironic!

I suspected, for a moment right there in the beginning, that her rescuer might've been Jack. (Not 'cest-fic, just Jack luring his daughter away to be with him, 'stead of her mother.) i'm glad I was wrong.

[veronica_rich]

This popped into my head while I was doing laundry today. It wanted to be a revenge fic, but I couldn't imagine Will holding a grudge for 20 years. Besides, Sarah is much more her father's daughter than her mother's. ;-)

Glad you liked it!

[pseudoblu]

Ouch. Well. Will's obviously irresistible to Swanns and Sparrows alike.

[veronica_rich]

I'm glad you liked it. It only makes sense that if the bird-watcher watches long enough and proves he's harmless to them, the birds might take an interest in him ...

[yoiebear]

I love this little bit! Painful and perfect, all at once.

[veronica_rich]

You make a choice, you suffer the consequences ...

Thanks for commenting!

[ballincollig]

Hm! That's a terribly interesting premise, and you tied it all up so perfectly in so very few words. Refreshingly original!

Does this count as Turrow? *g*

[veronica_rich]

I'm glad you thought it was worth reading!

Does this count as Turrow?

Hmm ... do you want it to? *G*

[erinya]

I like this! (I'm glad it didn't turn into revenge fic, because I think this is much more effective.)

It would be futile anyway, she figured, for a Sparrow of any age to explain themselves

Ha, indeed.

Love the description of the older Will, his intensity in young Billy, and Sarah's father’s smirk on her lips.

[veronica_rich]

It wouldn't have worked if Will weren't Will - and Will's much more interested in going after what he wants than in spending time holding grudges. It's part of why I love the boy.

Those blasted Sparrows. Do whatever the hell they want, I tell you what ...

Thanks!