This is AMAZING. I can't actually pinpoint how many things that I want to flail about, because I want to freak out about ALL of them. Amy and Rory and Pondlings and all the little nooks and crannies of this universe that you've filled with your own life and oh my god, I love you. This- this is amazing. Just, everything. Eduardo and Mark's phone call and older Mark and the details- god, I can't get over the details, this place you've brought to life and his mom and Frank and just. I can't get out all the endearments I want to throw at you right now. I do have to say that this makes me want to write something about how Mark and Eduardo founded the Time Agency.
"I have a spoiler for you, sweetheart." She smells like gunpowder, and her lips brushes his ear when she whispers, "It's a happy ending."
It's your fault, y'know. By which I mean, I must worship you til the end of my days for pointing out that lovely HP/TSN fusion and guaranteeing my lifelong love of this wonderful writer. ♥
My heart has no idea how to handle this. At one point, I had to get up and walk away so I could calm down. You ever have that feeling where it's almost like you're walking on the edge of something, that kind of light, nervousness where even when you know it won't really hurt when you fall, you still might and it's kind of disorienting?
Or have you ever looked over an edge and had to close your eyes and your heart's in your throat because you get this feeling like someone's going to push you in the back, but you open your eyes and don't move away, because for some reason, it's like your fascinated and you can't stop lookingThat's the feeling I got, the throat constricting, chest tightening, dangerous thrill sort of sensation. I became that emotionally involved in the story and I had to get up and breathe, stop myself from tensing up and my eyes from misting, then I could read again
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I really wish I had a coherent reply for this. I really, really do. IF YOU COULD HEAR THE SOUNDS MY HEART IS MAKING RIGHT NOW, CL, OH MY GOD.
I think, maybe, that this is every person's dream: to be somewhere and to know that they've had some kind of effect on another person, and it's especially true of writers, isn't it? To write something that makes people feel. It makes my day that I've made yours, oh my gosh, so many hearts in my eyes right now.
But seriously, it is I who should be thanking you, because if you hadn't shown me otherpictures's icon post and then encouraged me when I said, "THE DOCTOR SHOULD ASK EDUARDO TO HAVE SHENANIGANS IN TIME AND SPACE WITH HIM, Y/Y?" then I never would have been like, "... you know, I can make this work."
YOU DESERVE EVERY SINGLE WORD OF THIS FIC, CL, YOU ARE A FABULOUS PERSON ♥
Oh my actual god, this is so beautiful! I wanna live inside your brain, because were did all this come from? I mean of course, Doctor Who is the perfect backdrop but all these lovely stories with Eduardo's grandparents (Eeeep! FRANK!!), Amy and Rory, New Singapore! There is so much nuances, and it's just extremely well written. Love love love old, dare I say sassy, Mark! "I left a note on his Wall." This is absolutely amazing, wow what a work of art. Bravo *stands up and claps*
Adding River to anything makes my stomach do somersaults, because wherever she's popped up from and whatever she's up to, she's certainly not boring.
As to the whole of it: Elizabeth, seriously, you are incredible. There is an ever-subtle difference between the two parts, between the Universe-narrative, and Earth-narrative, and it's so BEAUTIFUL. The whole remembrace sequence is perfect. ALL THE WORDS. Especially airless - airless is going to be my favourite words for a few days at least, I just can't stop repeating it inside my head. And you compared Wardo to html code, xflkbadjzoweqwqenjat you genius is unsurpassed!
I can't deal with how much I love this, and all of them and how in awe of your writing I am. Here, have a gif to prove it.
oh my god I am never breathing again. YOUR COMMENTS. I don't even know what to do, they are so wonderful and fabulous and they make me FREAK OUT, full on flaily hands kind of freak out, because I am so very happy. You are important to me and your opinion is important and it makes MY DAY when I've done something you liked and shuifhuihfkjsddks fdushsdjkf brb gushing.
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"I have a spoiler for you, sweetheart." She smells like gunpowder, and her lips brushes his ear when she whispers, "It's a happy ending."
Best ending ever. I actually teared up.
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Or have you ever looked over an edge and had to close your eyes and your heart's in your throat because you get this feeling like someone's going to push you in the back, but you open your eyes and don't move away, because for some reason, it's like your fascinated and you can't stop lookingThat's the feeling I got, the throat constricting, chest tightening, dangerous thrill sort of sensation. I became that emotionally involved in the story and I had to get up and breathe, stop myself from tensing up and my eyes from misting, then I could read again ( ... )
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I think, maybe, that this is every person's dream: to be somewhere and to know that they've had some kind of effect on another person, and it's especially true of writers, isn't it? To write something that makes people feel. It makes my day that I've made yours, oh my gosh, so many hearts in my eyes right now.
But seriously, it is I who should be thanking you, because if you hadn't shown me otherpictures's icon post and then encouraged me when I said, "THE DOCTOR SHOULD ASK EDUARDO TO HAVE SHENANIGANS IN TIME AND SPACE WITH HIM, Y/Y?" then I never would have been like, "... you know, I can make this work."
YOU DESERVE EVERY SINGLE WORD OF THIS FIC, CL, YOU ARE A FABULOUS PERSON ♥
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This is absolutely amazing, wow what a work of art. Bravo *stands up and claps*
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As to the whole of it: Elizabeth, seriously, you are incredible. There is an ever-subtle difference between the two parts, between the Universe-narrative, and Earth-narrative, and it's so BEAUTIFUL. The whole remembrace sequence is perfect. ALL THE WORDS. Especially airless - airless is going to be my favourite words for a few days at least, I just can't stop repeating it inside my head. And you compared Wardo to html code, xflkbadjzoweqwqenjat you genius is unsurpassed!
I can't deal with how much I love this, and all of them and how in awe of your writing I am. Here, have a gif to prove it.
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/HUGS AND NEVER NEVER LETS GO
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