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mrstotten June 8 2011, 14:58:07 UTC
parking

Ok there are so many things I love about this. first Debs and her loyalty to Brian. I loved Debs in the show but sometimes thought she was too hard on him.

Loved Justin finding the strength to confront Ethan. That he cared enough about Brian to risk poking the sleeping wolf :P

but this bit

“What the hell are you...” The question died in Justin’s throat as Brian cupped his face in his hands, looked down at his painted eyes.

Justin froze as Brian dragged his thumb across the skin under Justin’s eye, smudging the dark eyeliner against his pale skin.

“Why are you hiding under all this shit?”

This scene has been in my mind for so long now and it still makes my tummy jump, it is like perfection in fic form

love love love ♥

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veritas_st June 10 2011, 08:08:42 UTC
You gave me that line darling.

LOVE YOU!

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mrstotten June 10 2011, 08:22:26 UTC
Yes, but you turned it into the beautiful scene it is :)

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veritas_st June 10 2011, 08:37:03 UTC
This is in danger of turning into a "i love you more" "no I love you more" "you hang up" no you hang up" convo.

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rainbow1907 June 8 2011, 15:38:58 UTC
Ewwwww... Ethan is a lying sack full of shit and I bet he makes an ugly and pretty pathetic werewolf too. Still Justin better hurries out of there pronto!
You know that wasn't the best place to stop... from a reader's point of view... just saying (and somewhat pouting because she doesn't like cliffhangers).
Otherwise - only good things to say, that was a brilliant update! I like how you manage to weave everybody into your story.
In fact, I love this whole story and I'd say I never even told you that before!!!
Many thanks and huge hugs,
Rena :)))

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veritas_st June 8 2011, 15:54:51 UTC
If it helps darling, the next part is already written!

no poppet, you never told me that before ;)! Glad you are still liking it though

xxx

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rainbow1907 June 8 2011, 16:26:47 UTC
See! I knew I hadn't told you that before ;) *shakes head sadly*
And it's great to know that the next part is already written, YAY!!! More, soon... yeah!
Hugs you, Rena :)

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veritas_st June 9 2011, 07:51:31 UTC
And here I was thinking you hated it!

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meggi63 June 8 2011, 16:30:40 UTC
Thanks for the great update. :)
This story is breathtaking and I so hope Brian gets his hand on this mean piece of shit aka Ethan and kicks the lies out of him. LOL. Run Justin run!
Can't wait for more!

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veritas_st June 9 2011, 08:01:45 UTC
Aww I am so glad that you are liking it. Thank you so much for reading.

Yes, Ethan will get his comeuppence dont you worry!

xx

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mander3_swish June 8 2011, 16:36:14 UTC
There had never been any documentation about vampires fathering human children, but somehow it had worked best non-explanation ever! :P when you brought Gus in I was like "huh?" So he's like Angel's Connor, but has a human mother....K, I'll go along with it :)

Fantastic chapter! loved the whole B/J confrontation under the stairs...was Justin 'compelled' for the first kiss too...or just the second kiss? (or is it just hot lusty thoughts Brian's slipping into his mind) either or, hot scene!

Can't wait for more...so glad the next chapter is already written...woot!

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veritas_st June 9 2011, 08:03:20 UTC
*curtseys* Thanks. I might delve deeper into that later but for now I think it works. Right? *looks dubious*

No first kiss was all him, second Brian only did it because Justin was angry.

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yvonnereid June 8 2011, 17:48:48 UTC
Truly an awesome update sweety,I so can't wait for more of this :)
Huge hugs xxx

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veritas_st June 9 2011, 08:03:41 UTC
Thanks sweetheart, the next bit is written, just editing at the moment.

xx

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