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veritas_st

I'm Trying Not To Feel You

Apr 11, 2011 12:26

Co written with mrstotten

Title taken from Keep Me a Secret, by Ainslie Henderson, and it started off as a tiny ficlet using the prompt "I'm trying not to feel you, but, you just brushed by..."

( But it’s hard. Pretending to be normal, not letting his feelings show. Randy copes by making sure that outside of filming, he and Gale don't touch. They talk, they laughed, they joke, but they never hug, or brush hands, or sit too close. Randy makes sure of it... )

qaf, fic, magsy, rps, gale and randy

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pet0511 April 11 2011, 14:04:05 UTC

The big problem is: your RPS are always so good - it's impossible not to read and enjoy them.
It doesn't matter how you are telling the story, who is struggeling and why...every time you are making each story so believable, so "this way it could have been...".
Here comes one FURIOUS Gale Harold and I can easily picture him this way in such an extreme situation. And a well knowing Peter, finally taking matters into hands...perfect!
Wow, and you are really fast with your writing, that's so good!!! Thanks so so much! Pet

veritas_st April 11 2011, 14:14:22 UTC

Ok you had me worried then when you started with "the problem is..."

Thank you soooooo much pet, so lovely to know that you enjoyed this. mrstotten actually wrote the bit with Peter, she has Peter down perfectly, I dont!

Being fast comes with having a quiet job! And mrstotten having a quiet job too!

pet0511 April 11 2011, 16:21:34 UTC

:-). I know my name caused some interesting confusion earlier as nickname for a sub...
Anyway, it's just the short form/nickname for Petra.

veritas_st April 11 2011, 16:23:09 UTC

That, I am sorry if it offended you, but is one of the funniest things I have heard all day!

pet0511 April 11 2011, 18:18:08 UTC

Don't worry! You mean the confusion my name caused, do you? Well, that was nothing compared to my own confusion, believe me! I had no idea when I came here, just having been so proud to get an LJ account all alone. Like the most of us I soon read about Making a Scene and liked to read it, so I asked for being friended, and I got a sweet answer which I couldn't understand at this time, and Laurie, the author, just said "you'll see...".
I don't think that double meaning was in her mind when my bestie gave me this nickname at the age of 7...

veritas_st April 11 2011, 21:14:57 UTC

yeah, the confusion is funny! It never even occurred to me, just assumed it was a nickname, but not for a sub!

mrstotten April 11 2011, 19:36:00 UTC

You realise I don't actually have a quiet job yes? my work is freaking manic, I just find it more fun to write porn with you :P

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