A/Z for Mercurial March aka Dysfunctional Relationship Part 3

[verisimilitude9]

I seem to be on a crunchy roll of angst? I don't know. A/Z this time around.

Title: Love Story
Ship: A/Z

I pray you, in your letters,
When you shall these unlucky deeds relate,
Speak of me as I am; nothing extenuate,
Nor set down aught in malice. Then must you speak
Of one that loved not wisely but too well... Shakespeare, Othello

Comments

[venusorbit1]

GREAT thanks now I'm crying into my coffee. I'll have to drink more to get the same effect. You da best Thalia.

Divorced parents, a childhood of silent chess games and the written word for company. He'd like to graffiti the word 'Why?' on every single one of the missing father's paintings, he thinks. But that wouldn't make her smile.

SOOO emo crippled by emo omg unfff

[verisimilitude9]

Consider these ficlets preludes for Angsty April, I guess? It all depends on what types of havoc Lytton others will wreak. I will only angst/destroy/break LOA!Zach as a last resort :P

YOU da best V! When I can haz Curveball??

[ellorgast]

This is so beautiful! I love all the vivid details and the characterization is so spot-on!

The squeal she emits when he catches her up in his arms and kisses her in sheer relief is the most glorious sound he has ever heard in his life.

This is the greatest closing line! From cold, surgical precision to squealing! It just shows how perfect they are together.

[verisimilitude9]

Oh pfft everything pales in comparison to your incredible A/Z that you posted recently I iz unworthy hack whatever.

But glad you liked!

[apsaraqueen]

i LOVE the squeal at the end, it's such a release from all the building anxiety and sadness threaded throughout, it almost makes me want to EEE a little myself :P beautiful description and portrayal of these two!

[verisimilitude9]

Glad you liked! It's always very endearing when someone can get the reserved Ami to do such a thing.

[mrcrybrilliance]

!!! He did it, he managed to break through!

That makes me exceedingly happy!

I'm so glad LJ finally started working, I've been wanting to read this since I woke up.

This is just...perfect. So very very perfect.

[verisimilitude9]

Glad you liked! I was trying to get it in under the wire for Mercury March :D

Naturally she couldn't resist his lovely lovely hair :P No one can.

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[elianthos]

I squealed a bit myself at the end XD .
*claps hands* Good job, as usual :>

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[verisimilitude9]

Thank you!! And once again a million times thanks for the lovely art!