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verisimilitude9

Random Ficlet Is Random?

Mar 11, 2011 07:39

Chalk it up to stress/weather changes/insomnia/irritation/a prelude to Angsty April?

I really intended to work on something fluffy and happy for upcoming birthdays (i.e. cbrandtwright and sugarcross). But... things don't always go according to plan. At least it's your OTP, girls? Slightly angsty, but I don't think too bad.

Also, blame this songTitle: All That Glitters ( Read more... )

flashfic/drabbles

Comments 7

lovelylytton March 11 2011, 14:02:52 UTC

You win. That is all.

rainbabie1 April 11 2011, 16:07:55 UTC

I agree... this is lovely!

elianthos March 11 2011, 17:24:29 UTC

You even slipped the Bard quote in it. Oh how I love you so.

ellorgast March 11 2011, 22:14:53 UTC

This is lovely. I love how she toys with him, how she's so whimsical and changes from one meeting to the next, how she almost intentionally sabotages what they have but still can't stay away. And the choice of quote at the end. The lead box! It's brilliant.

cbrandtwright March 12 2011, 05:24:34 UTC

Love. In such a short amount of time you've managed to cover almost the entire domain of human emotion. I also love that it's predominantly from Kunzite's 'voice.'

venusorbit1 March 19 2011, 01:14:11 UTC

UNG. You know how much I love your writing so I'll stop blathering about that. I worship your feet.

Now, a few weeks back, I imagine someone found a "SMUT" button on you and pressed it. And you started with Spacesmut. Well, now I'm searching your body for that Smut Button. Oh look I've found it. Right on your non-tits!

Now I'm pressing that button. Repeatedly.

Now I'm hammering at it with my fist.

Now I'm jumping on it.

I don't know what is more awesome: the physicality of her character or the progression of scenes...I don't know. I just love. I covet. I want. I <3