Grammatical Escape (or) Bed and Breakfast with Complimentary Misplaced Modifiers

Feb 28, 2008 12:17

What's wrong with this paragraph?

The Cottage Room
The Cottage Room is a charming room for a single person, with windows facing the side yard, which is frequently visited by deer. Recently remodeled in the cottage style. Private bath. Full breakfast and afternoon tea.

That's right. I'm an event planner and a grammar snob.
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