Comments | verbal_impact: Some of My Work...

verbal_impact

Some of My Work...

Sep 17, 2004 17:52

To Kelly, -> I found this stashed away in one of my binders... give me some feedback on it ( Read more... )

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a little long wided but... xhurtxbyxyoux September 20 2004, 02:19:54 UTC

This poem does not sound childish...Just because you are young does not mean that you can not have feelings forn some one... thats when the feelings are the most intense ... i believe any way because when you are young you still havent been burnt by the fire. Unfortuanately it does happen to us all but we learn from it, i think we learn not to put too much into a relationship so quick as we do when we are young. This is not necessarily tgood but its what we as humans do as defense mechanisims... my point is your poem is beautiful.

Re: a little long wided but... verbal_impact September 20 2004, 02:27:50 UTC

So true... so true. I have been burned by the fire so I probably could never sport something this innocent again. The next will be fervored with swears and mispronunciations like crazy, I promise! But thank you for your kind words... it's not every day I read something that brightens my day just a little. Thank you again!!!