Fic: Sound of a Trembling Heart

[verasteine]

Please read this story on the Archive Of Our Own.

Comments

[luvinthe88and20]

Lovely job, I really liked it.

[verasteine]

Thank you!

[goddess_ophelia]

This is just gorgeous!!

"Jack turns, looks at him, and steps into Ianto's embrace. As Ianto winds his arms around Jack's shoulders and feels Jack's heart pound against his own chest, he wonders when he fell in love with Jack."

OOOOOOHHH!
*adds to memories*

[verasteine]

Thank you very much! Glad that line worked for you!

[fmanalyst]

Lovely

[verasteine]

Thanks! Glad you liked!

[amand_r]

I think you really slayed me with the framing device. I love your stiff, almost emotionally crippled, awkward Ianto. That works for me so well.

This is fantastic.

[verasteine]

Ooh, thank you! It took some debating on my part whether I could sell him like this, but I'm glad to hear he worked for you, so thank you!

[madtheo]

Gorgeous job dealing with the pain, insecurity and love in their relationship. And the way you broke it up into powerful little snippets was well done.

Beautiful job.

[verasteine]

Thank you! Glad you liked!