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fmanalyst February 21 2009, 16:32:46 UTC
:-) I like it.

Though I imagine Ianto is the sort to panic over being late. Or maybe that's just me projecting onto him.

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verasteine February 21 2009, 16:39:34 UTC
Glad you do!

No, I think you're right, he would -- but the way I set it up, I sort of don't give him the time to panic. And then there is the day before as well... So that's the reason why he doesn't panic this time. If that makes any sense. :)

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verasteine February 22 2009, 14:13:49 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad the comedy came across...

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misswinterhill February 21 2009, 23:57:07 UTC
I enjoyed this one! But you knew I enjoyed the original too. I liked the way that everything still wasn't quite perfectly right, and the physical detail in the first part of Ianto banging his hand and losing his balance. It felt very real.

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verasteine February 22 2009, 14:14:29 UTC
All my stories always play out like a film in my head -- so it's just a matter of writing down all the details I see. Thanks for commenting!

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thrace_adams February 22 2009, 04:09:55 UTC
Oh I liked this very much! Nice addition to that story :)

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verasteine February 22 2009, 14:14:54 UTC
Thank you! There's another one on the way, this one was very popular.

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thrace_adams February 22 2009, 23:49:10 UTC
OH goody! Looking forward to that :)

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