You are House.
Title: End of the Line
Subject: House/Cameron
Word count: 3225
Rating: PG-13
Preview: When you stand at one end of the line, you think that point the start. You look toward the other end, that's the one you call the end. What if you stood there instead? Would it be the start?
Notes: (firstly, above is not an excerpt) This is written in a second- ( Read more... )
as for vague and unnecessary language, well--i thought this was full of them XD
Trust me, you haven't read some of the stuff I have. A lot of language is good, but only when there's a point to it. And what you have here isn't unnecessary, it actually conveys something. In the fics that I've read, the language was there for the sake of being there and looking pretty, something that the author felt obligated to include, just because they've seen it in a million other second-person fics out there. With yours, I didn't have to reread the whole thing a million times (though I did read it again because I liked it), to understand what was going on. I guess that's why I don't like most.
You should try delving into his mind sometimes ;]
I don't know if I'm quite ready to do that yet. House is a really complicated guy and I don't know if I'm ready to jump into his head just yet. The writing skills need some work before I can make an attempt at delving into his [somewhat insane] psyche, LOL...
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Yeah i really do try to avoid too much confusion. Because when i come across those in other fics i think to myself, does this not make sense or am i mentally imcompetent? @_@; i don't like that (especially when it's usually the latter reason, haha)
The writing skills need some work before I can make an attempt at delving into his [somewhat insane] psyche, LOL...
XD he IS insane alright, but you are more than able :)
Thanks for the comments, i'll know what to avoid now :D
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