Now I'm not normally a smutty person, but this deserves kudos. :D A lot of authors tend to take a nosedive once they get into the sexing territory, and the responses tend to get textbook, almost like you could take them and insert them into another sex scene.
THIS scene, though. This scene was really IC, and the dynamics were great. You did really well with this, and I like how you make a lot of it about permission, like with the kiss.
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THIS scene, though. This scene was really IC, and the dynamics were great. You did really well with this, and I like how you make a lot of it about permission, like with the kiss.
(Is this our RP? :D)
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Th-thank you very much. fbakabkj I'm glad you liked this.
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