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Oct 07, 2008 17:05

RPG CONCRIT MEME

♥ Critic, don't bash. Believe it or not, there's a difference.
♥ Feel free to disagree, but don't get all butthurt about it.

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thanoodles October 8 2008, 00:33:10 UTC
L-lol. Why not.

Clockwork

"Alligator" Nichol / Jackals / thealligator
Haruko Haruhara / FLCL / smackmybitchup
Luki and Noki / DOGS / letsplayagame
Renton Thurston / Eureka Seven / ridethewaves
Shinji Ikari / NGE: Gakuen Datenroku / onlyaccidental
Suzaku Kururugi / Code Geass / changewithin

Paradisa

Kaworu Nagisa / NGE: Gakuen Datenroku / even-us

Mallow Mateys

Haruko Haruhara / FLCL / deliciouscurry
Cheese (NPC) / Foster's Home For Imaginary Friends / cheeeeeeeeeeese

Moulin Noir

Bridget / Guilty Gear / justanassistant

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aliquot October 8 2008, 02:42:26 UTC
Haruko is hilaaaarious! ♥ I can't critique cuz I know nothing of the fandom. :(

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thanoodles October 8 2008, 22:15:49 UTC
Thanks! You should watch FLCL.

N
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*eyes intensely.*

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aliquot October 8 2008, 22:40:27 UTC
I tried once. I didn't get it.

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thanoodles October 8 2008, 22:48:03 UTC
b-but

that's the entire point.

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legit October 8 2008, 06:30:02 UTC
I love your Haruka, she's just so awesome and out there that I just HAVE to poke her I really wish I could make Kagura join her crew after all because seriously, I'm just so amazed with how well you play her and I just love reading her threads--they make me giggle~

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thanoodles October 8 2008, 22:16:50 UTC
sldkfjsldkfjsldkfjwpeoi ♥ !! Thank you so much. I'm always afraid I'm making her too much of a retard.

... then I remember that it's virtually impossible.

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legit October 9 2008, 05:50:18 UTC
She's awesomely epic and honestly I just almost want to see her get ONE Piece just to see the craziness she'd inflict...

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thanoodles October 9 2008, 07:28:27 UTC
Bridget's birthday is October 26th, not on the 6th.

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thanoodles October 9 2008, 07:51:06 UTC
(Same anon)

Come to think of it, I have just looked through your information and Bridget is also not tall. It is clear when you see him standing by others that he is fairly small.

Your Bridget/Ky relationship boggles the mind/sort of makes me buuuh, and placing the this boy in a sex RP is beyond me. I will say that his personality is done very well.

Take caution when posting characters in sex RPs up in crit memes. I for one don't agree with placing a young boy in that kind of a situation, especially the innocent Bridget, who has hints of his parents keeping him away from that kind of thing written all over him. (The nun getup and the handcuff around his waist)

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thanoodles October 9 2008, 09:51:33 UTC
Okay, then. First of all, thanks for actually leaving some criticism.

About his birthday
... well, shit. This is one of those times I actually want to headdesk. I could've sworn it was that date, but I guess this is what I get for not double-checking. I'll fix that when I get back home.

Height
Really? Because, playing the game, it always looked to me like he had really long legs and was practically as tall as the other (adult) characters. :[

Bridget/Ky
I did specify in my application that they were not pairings I actually shipped - just the ones that I could somehow find the least believable. I'm not a crazy yaoi fangirl, mind you, but the impression I got from playing the game (X2) was that they could somehow build some sort of relationship (not going into the romantic field just yet, btw) in which Ky would be protective of Bridget and. Well. The rest sort of explains itself. I'm not trying to get this kid into some sort of affair, I'm not trying to find an excuse to go 'oops, there goes his virginity!' either. So rest assured ( ... )

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same as inukitake, btw 7th_warrant October 9 2008, 09:59:26 UTC
His official height is 158cm. That's about 5'2.

And I always got the impression that Ky found him more annoying than anything...he did just sort of "Please take this money and never bounty hunt ever again" to him. But hey, we aren't here to discuss.

I still honestly don't think that is a sort of job Bridget would ever take, no matter the circumstance. But that is just an opinion.

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thanoodles October 9 2008, 10:01:40 UTC
I got the chance to see that when you gave me the link. Thanks.

And I appreciate it.

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nunsensebridget October 9 2008, 10:15:52 UTC
Hi I'm anon-guy. o/ I anon because I'm afraid I sound like an asshole when I crit and am a chicken shit. XD

Birthday/Height/minor details- The information (if you own the game) is in the manual and also in the beginning of his story mode. I think that's about 5'2, which is pretty short, although most of that is leg, ha ha. (His eyes are also officially listed as emerald, but that's me nitpicking, as I always do, because I often get into bickering about his eye colour. lol, at least you didn't say blue ( ... )

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nunsensebridget October 9 2008, 10:16:47 UTC
Also, thanks for TAKING the crit. Because some people just don't. :/

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thanoodles October 9 2008, 10:27:45 UTC
Oh, hi! And, well, I didn't mind you being anon at all, since you were actually pretty reasonable about your criticism and didn't just throw a "you suck, get the fuck out" comment without some sort of explanation.

It's been a while since I've played the game, and I've made it pretty obvious that I rushed into the roleplay without doing research. I guess I just relied on what little I remembered - or thought I did - from his canon. B-big mistake.

I can understand that, really. I get the 'this character is in a sex RP? What the hell were they thinking?' thought a lot, too.

Still, I'm hoping that I can work on him well enough to place him just a little closer to your standards. Again, thank you for the crit. ♥

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