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velvet_mace

My losing Iron Kink Entry!

Dec 04, 2005 16:50

TITLE: Freedom
PAIRING: Manga!Bradley/Roy.
RATING: NC-17
WARNING: Bondage, slavery, misuse of office equipment, humiliation. Spoilers to the end of the Manga.

I kinda rushed the ending on this, cuz I wanna take a walk.

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zalia December 5 2005, 01:10:09 UTC

Hmmm, I feel so dirty for liking this ^^;

Very hot, very wrong ^_~

I love Hawkeye saving Roy at the end *__*

velvet_mace December 5 2005, 03:11:29 UTC

Yeah, I wanted a happy ending. But... I could have left that off too.

qem_chibati December 5 2005, 01:28:52 UTC

Three cheers for Riza to the rescue!~

velvet_mace December 5 2005, 03:11:58 UTC

Hee hee!

Someones gotta save poor Roy... from ME!

cryogenia December 5 2005, 14:50:03 UTC

I second that wtf XD The rubberbands as dick ring were hot, though. Actually the whole THING was hot, even if I don't care about Wrath whatsoever :)

velvet_mace December 5 2005, 20:56:54 UTC

Aw, you don't like Bradley? He's kinda cute in a one eyed sorta way.

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crack_alchemist December 5 2005, 01:44:46 UTC

as always you amaze me with your interesting concepts.

*applauds*

velvet_mace December 5 2005, 03:12:41 UTC

Why thank you. What amazes me is that I thought I could write this concept in 60 minutes. It's 4800 words long!!! I so failed.

crack_alchemist December 5 2005, 04:33:32 UTC

*snerk*

sometimes those muses run away with the story and then you're stuck...

andarton December 5 2005, 02:34:30 UTC

that was awesome! I very much loved your descriptions of Roy's reactions. Am almost disappointed that Riza came and saved him.. but I suppose I should be nice and be happy for him.

velvet_mace December 5 2005, 03:13:28 UTC

Yeah, you know, I honestly wasn't sure I wanted to rescue him... but in the end I erred on the side of a happy ending.

andarton December 5 2005, 03:57:20 UTC

can't say as I blame you. But I guess it is more uplifting this way!

twisted_spark December 5 2005, 02:39:57 UTC

oh my i like this ^_^ very nice, I had a lot of naughty yaoi thoughts fly though my head when Roy was well.. basically kidnapped my Wrath in the manga, oh man this was good!

velvet_mace December 5 2005, 03:14:07 UTC

I really want to see the next chapter. I'm like totally DYING to find out what Wrath is going to do with Roy.

twisted_spark December 5 2005, 03:27:29 UTC

oh god i know!! what is it...two weeks until the next chapter is up? it's normally on the 12th right?

velvet_mace December 5 2005, 04:32:53 UTC

Waaaaah... thats too long!!!