Pawns Chapter 14

[velvet_mace]

Comments

[asidian]

Ooh. I felt that punch of surprise when Al found out that they'd tortured Mustang. That was really nicely done, but I have to say, not knowing this plan is driving me -nuts-. It looks to be on a massive scale, whatever it is. I hope Roy knows what he's doing. O_o

Loving your characterization of Winry, still, and Al's axhibitionist streak is adorable. ^^

[velvet_mace]

I teased people with the plan for ages before revealing it, didn't I.

I actually thought it would be obvious what they were up to, I was wrong.

[arkanefyre]

Squealing over exhibitionist!Al.

I'm sensing some brother reunion thing, mutual understanding, like. And I'm really glad.