Comments | velvet_mace: Pawns Chapter 12

velvet_mace

Pawns Chapter 12

May 29, 2005 23:37

fma: roy/ed, fma: al/winry, plot, angst, shounen-ai, fma, pawns, oc

Comments 6

asidian July 28 2005, 15:41:20 UTC

Short comment on this one, because I have to run, but omg this is LOVE.

Adore you- yay for Roy's emotional pep talk! *all sorts of little hearts*

velvet_mace July 28 2005, 20:03:48 UTC

Roy has an ungodly ability to get people to do what he wants them to in this fic.

But yea! This was my first real honest no fakery Yaoi kiss. Like in my life. I wrote this and said, well, that wasn't too hard. And then I got fangirled all over ff.net and got bold enough to write my first smut: The Third Rule.

asidian July 28 2005, 21:43:55 UTC

...well, good thing for this kiss, then. Otherwise The Third Rule might never have been. ^^ *waves a 'yayyy vm smut' flag*

arkanefyre July 29 2005, 18:31:45 UTC

*happy sigh*

This is IT. Wonderful OTP-ness.

Keeping it short, because all I can do is sigh and sigh and sigh.

Your Ed and Al = <3
Your manipulative!Roy = <33333

Your Elrics + Mustang = <33333 + all the cookies you ever wanted and the oven.

velvet_mace July 29 2005, 18:37:25 UTC

I'm so glad you are enjoying this.

Roy is INCREDIBLY manipulative.

I'm so fighting the urge to make spoilery comments.

eli_artemisia February 24 2007, 19:39:33 UTC

Awww, favorite chapter yet ( wow, I almost wrote sex talk XD )