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asidian July 28 2005, 15:09:40 UTC
Midnight's utter failure to understand Al's reluctance was fantastic. Sooo manipulative and wonderful. <3

And Ed's views on sex, him thinking about Winry and Al, and in general just frustrated un-distracted is -fantastic-. This fic is -love-. <3

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velvet_mace July 28 2005, 19:57:24 UTC
LOL. Actually, love is seeing someone discover this fic chapter by chapter. It's like virtually getting the experience of reading it myself. Of course, I know what's coming up myself so there are no surprises for me, but it's nice to see your reaction.

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arkanefyre July 29 2005, 18:12:00 UTC
Ha HAH, Midnight, and you thought you were clever! What did I say about Mustang? He's way too smart for you, dear, and I'm just glad you're too ignorant to realize it. Mustang's using the situation to HIS advantage, and all you're doing is helping him.

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I just realized that my comments were directed at a character.

Oops.

But just so you know, this is wonderful. I can't wait to read the 20-something chapters I have left~

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velvet_mace July 29 2005, 18:18:47 UTC
You are a fast reader.

Midnight's my sweety. He's got flaws, arrogance, pretentiousness and machoness being just a few, but still. He's my sweet OC.

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