Follow up to Gifts.

[velvet_mace]

You know after this I think I'm going to take a break and do some CONSENSUAL fics. This is pretty rough, I'll be messing with it for a bit until it's smooth.

TITLE: TOY
PAIRING: Greed!Roy x Ed x Roy
RATING: NC-17
WARNINGS: Oh, this is just fucked up. Angst, discussion of torture, rape. Mindgames.

GIFTS

Comments

[zalia]

;___;

Damn. That's so depressing and heartbreaking. Poor everyone (except Greed).

Very powerful writing *hugs*

[velvet_mace]

Thanks. There will be one more part and this arc will be done.

[sky_dark]

Ah, geezus, this just HURTS. Are you planning on taking it further? (I hope, I hope)

[velvet_mace]

Yep. The last part will be the hollywood ending I promised Tavella.

[sky_dark]

What have I done to deserve you? *smooch*

[devils_devotion]

I AM GOING TO CONTENT MYSELF WITH SAYING THAT HOLLYWOOD = HAPPY.

*dies of angst*

(But oh, what a way to go! *fans self*)

[thisisnotmyname]

so horrible and disturbing and.. wonderful.

yay you're continuing it!

[velvet_mace]

Thanks. Oddly enough this fic, which was supposed to be hot and angsty, was squicker than the orriginal which was just angsty.

[lil_missb]

YAY!!! I was hoping that you'd write more of this and somehow Ed would be involved. It's like a dream come true!

:ahem:

I mean, poor Ed.

[velvet_mace]

What's better than one Roy on Ed... TWO!

Poor Ed. Yeah, but Poor Roy more.

[andarton]

wow.. O_O That was.. insane. Normally, despite the level of disturbingness in your fics, I am not disturbed. But this disturbed me. O_O (In a good way, don't worry! It's the sort of thing I'd write. But it would still disturb me if I wrote it)

Excellent job portraying everything. Making the contrast between normal Roy and utterly beaten Roy all the more touching. Showing Ed's feelings on everything in an utterly disturbing way. It was awesome.!

[velvet_mace]

I've been doing a lot of disturbing fics lately, I think I want to head in a happier direction for a bit.

[andarton]

Yeah, I've noticed. But I think that's a nice idea. I wouldn't mind reading your happier stuff!