There we are. Done. Yeah I have an idea of how to go forward with this. I'll be switching POV to Jeffrey, because it will be more his world. But it may take a bit before I post anything up. Meanwhile I think this stands on its own. I hope you all enjoyed this.
Comments:
Rosei: Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed this! Thank you for all the comments! And yes indeed Chuck is very smug with himself. He came out well.
FreyaS: Thank you! I'm so glad my characters kept your interest. I really loved writing them.
Womo: Thank you for being a reader. Yeah, Chuck is a bit much. Jeffrey's not a bad person. Just a bit over the top at times.
spoonring: Awwww!
Merely Truth: Ha ha, there, you got your threesome, hopefully with the people you were hoping for.
Antaris: No Chauncey and Abram, I was stuck in George's POV and Chauncey doesn't usually perform for an audience. Abram dies quietly with little fanfare. Serenity gets taken over by someone else. It's a humongous mess for the residents, but not one that really impacts George's life.
Azalea J.: Well you got the epilogue, and I'm working on a sequel, but ... we'll see. Changing the world really is another story though. A big difficult one.
Maloanne: Thank you. I know what's going on in the background, so that makes it easier to have what impacts the story seem like it holds together.
Zhan: I'm glad you enjoyed my story!
Kristi: I'm happy I bettered your expectations! And wow, who you stack me up with. Wow. I know what you mean about vampire stories. Especially since Twilight came out... urg! Too much high-school romance! I love sadism, but abusive vampires have gotten a bit overdone as well. My favorite kind of vampire is the decadent but loving asshole and they are so rare.