Undesirable: Chapter 11

Dec 25, 2008 11:38

TITLE: Undesirable (A vampire novel)
RATING: NC-17 (This chapter PG-13)
GENRE: Porn with plot -- heavy on the plot. Action/adventure, some black humor, some romance.
PAIRINGS: George x everyone. Mostly Slash, some het, three and moresomes. Vampire sex.
WARNINGS: (this chapter) none.
WORD COUNT: 6398

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arkanefyre December 26 2008, 00:09:46 UTC
Ahhhh! Politics at its finest! I can not wait. I'm assuming Wilderists are more liberal in terms of policy then? More of a Democrat?

Oh Georgey, look, Lord Fancy Trousers missed you! Nadette is deliciously evil, and I quite enjoy reading about her.

Merry Christmas!

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velvet_mace December 26 2008, 01:01:27 UTC
Not exactly. If I had to put them in human political catagories, Wilderist is actually more Libertarian, and Eugenist really doesn't have an equivalent.

Trying not to bog things down too much with the politics, but a touch of it was necessary so that the readers don't think that the Vampires are some hive mind or something.

The Eugenists basically are the ones who believe the best way to go is to tightly manage their assets, and basically take a more hands on approach to governing humans (ostentatiously for their own good) -- they are "farmers". Wilderists are "hunters" and prefer to let humans manage their own affairs as much as possible. Neither are better. The Eugenists are generally denounced as petty anal beurocrats, the wilderests as being lazy aristocrats, so pick your poison.

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Thanks! regnet December 28 2008, 02:13:58 UTC
Thanks so much for the update. The political background was wonderful. You have an astounding imagination! I'm on vacation and could not resist checking in - and there it was... what a lovely Christmas treat. Our bright and dear Lord Jeffrey to the rescue, and a political enemy of Nadette?! Wow. Thanks again - and may you have a happy new year dreaming more adventures for our dear, dear George.

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Re: Thanks! velvet_mace December 28 2008, 19:06:48 UTC
Well Lord Jeffrey does have his work cut out for him. But we'll see what he can do.

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trustingfrndshp December 26 2008, 01:52:35 UTC
I was actually glad to see Jeffrey show up... the enemy you know and all... I don't think I like Nadette even though she didn't abuse George... and would like to see George escape again; thanks for the update-great X-Mas gift!

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velvet_mace December 26 2008, 02:59:52 UTC
Well, she crushed his nuts, I'd consider that abusive. And putting a chastity belt on him was also pretty cruel.

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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militsa December 30 2008, 16:36:09 UTC

eternityras May 28 2010, 15:38:34 UTC
i had to google "shit-eating grin" because i NEEDED a visual of jeffery in that state. yes. i did. turned up interesting stuffs *smirk*

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velvet_mace May 31 2010, 02:43:02 UTC
Oh dear. Oh.... oh dear. I hope you had safe-search on.

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green_yeti June 17 2011, 16:26:57 UTC
This is so awesome! I just love George and how he's so stubborn and Jeffrey is back on the scene! I realise there's like 32+ epilogue chapters and I can't wait to get there. :D

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